Black Poetry : That Sh*T Was Wrong

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  1. monad.poetress

    monad.poetress Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    That Sh*t Was Wrong
    By Monad.poetress


    So many times I think about yo low down wayz
    when you did that sh*t I cried for dayz
    My heart was broken I must admit
    And I can't forgive you for that crazy sh*t
    You didn't think about me and how I would feel
    But you call yo self keepin' it real
    That sh*t was crucial and I can't even try
    to forgive yo *** for tellin' me a lie
    You call me now as if nothing is wrong
    But now all the love for you is gone
    How could you lie///and justify the lie///with a lie
    Thats a lame *** excuse for a try
    My heart is real and you took it in your hands
    And broke it slowly with your terrible plan
    Pain like this lasts so long
    I just want you to know that sh*t was wrong
     
  2. Khasm13

    Khasm13 STAFF STAFF

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    i've felt this same way at one time...
    pain is a teacher...
    it teaches us what we don't need...
    emotive piece
    one love
    khasm
     
  3. SwtT

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    very tight piece...Pain like that makes thing hard to forgive
     
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    well felt from da venting of pain
     
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    If it's wrong, no use in trying to make it right, hopefully you can use it as one of life's lessons. I could feel the pain here, deeply expressed.
     
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    Pain don't last ...always, but the pain that you do have...use it wisely. this was a very nice work of art. Thanks for sharing this with family
     
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