Black Poetry : That Sexy...SEXY Voice...

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by LovelyGoldenOne, Apr 25, 2003.

  1. LovelyGoldenOne

    LovelyGoldenOne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    subtle curiosity,
    built animosity
    your voice,
    speaks like a thought to me
    deep,
    yet gently
    sweet,
    yet meaningful
    who knew a voice could be so...
    whelming and full?
    soft,
    as a breeze flow
    strong,
    as a wind blow
    bearing,
    as a rainfall
    rough,
    as the thunder...
    raw...
    MY subtle curiosity
    YOUR built animosity
    your voice seems to make love to me
    too bad your not here...
     
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    serenti-poet Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    dayum! dayum! dayum! gurrrrrrllllll that is deep as hell felt it right HERRE gurl. I know what you mean, deep voices and I mean deep voices get MY juices flowin. lol keep flowin luv yo style. -----serenti
     
  3. LovelyGoldenOne

    LovelyGoldenOne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanks...its just how i feel about my man's voice... glad u liked it :)
     
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    oooooooooh! I want to flow like that! Word!
     
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    daayyyyuuummm...........makes me think of this guy i used to talk to........tight poem.....much love :)
     
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    well scribed well felt and well said
    poet keep flowin da flava u pose
     
  7. LovelyGoldenOne

    LovelyGoldenOne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanks for the compliments everybody... :)
     
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    lovely ..... just lovely
     
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    LovelyGoldenOne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanks alot :)
     
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    MMMMMMMM, this was tight. I love the way you laced these words so simply and effectively. There were light sensual undertones in this piece that made it even more pleasurable to read. Well written poet!