Black Poetry : THAT RIGHT DON'T BELONG TO YOU

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by pztvnrg, Apr 3, 2001.

  1. pztvnrg

    pztvnrg Active Member MEMBER

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    We meet but can't properly greet
    'cause you too busy sizin' me up

    Too dark: Too light
    Clothes too big: Too tight
    Must be African: Lilly white
    Too pretty: Pretty ugly
    From the ghetto: Yuppy
    Tryin' to be white: Wanna be black
    White trash: Hood rat
    Mighty skinny: Awful fat
    Republican: Democrat
    ****

    You just wasted energy
    Assuming responsibility
    For a job that does not belong to thee

    The position of Judge belongs to one
    And it aint you
    I mean no disrespect
    But: Get a clue
    THAT RIGHT.....
     
  2. 8th wonder

    8th wonder Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Finally you post this one!! Been waiting to see it appear..
    I love it...
    Thanks...

    8th!
     
  3. dnommo

    dnommo Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    well... i, uhhh, i mean, it wasn't like that exactly i mean i was...oh nevamind... :rolling:

    this piece is tight and i mean tight. i undertand the feelings of this one and i applaud the tone in which it is presented. let 'em know poetess...let them know...
     
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    Bishop Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    You're right about this.....Who has the right to judge? Only he who sits high and looks low......
     
  5. pztvnrg

    pztvnrg Active Member MEMBER

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    thanx d&k k&d whatever i appreciate the feed
    peace&1luv, pztvnrg
     
  6. pztvnrg

    pztvnrg Active Member MEMBER

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    you feel me 'B'thanx
     
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