Black Poetry : That Poet in between

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  1. Afridancr

    Afridancr Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    That poet
    ----------------------------
    in beween the lines of
    ----------------------------

    You and I
    he's...

    b l o c k i n vocal
    Mess i ges

    Like-
    that Mack truck
    bl ock in traffic @5pm

    brotha
    disrupted my
    f l o w
    I was
    spirit mental int I lectually
    LoVe MaCkiN you

    til " wanna be" decided to

    R
    ................O
    ..........L ...............L
    in

    c------------------c
    ---r-----------r---
    ------0----0-----
    --------s---------
    ------s----s----
    ----i---------i---
    n----------------n

    Paths...
    my path


    d
    .........r
    ...................i
    ............v
    ........i
    ...n
    Wheels of words

    ---------------------
    in between lines
    ---------------------
    while I rhyme

    Now, I know I'm a dyme
    and you may wanna spend tyme

    --alone--

    listening to my
    spirit mental
    intIllectual
    LoVe ScRiBe
    but I can't ablige
    you.

    Why? Cause...I ain't
    f e e l i n
    ya vybe
    ya flow yo

    maybe if you came

    --correct--

    show a lady some

    --respect--

    I wouldnt make you come

    --clean--

    by
    B L O W I n Up

    ya spot on this
    PoEtRy ScEnE

    under
    n o r m a l
    circumstances I
    wouldn't
    E x E c U t E
    such a scheme

    BUT...you are that poet

    --------------------------
    in between the lines
    --------------------------

    c r o s s i n l a n e s
    B l O c K i N
    spirit mental
    intIllectual
    poetic flows

    YEAH...YEAH!


    " I bet you think this peace is about you, bout you , bout
    youuuuuuuuuuuu"



    :D
     
  2. MapleXtract

    MapleXtract Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Ooooooooh!!!

    What can I say?
    My goodness girlie,
    you ripped it, I
    don't even know
    how to explain
    my first reaction
    but what I put there
    in the subject
    should help a bit
    in that department.
    Speak ya mind, scribe...
     
  3. GA_Sunshyne

    GA_Sunshyne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Afri.


    (Mi...oops! almost called ya da otha name! :lol: )

    sister dear... i'm shakin' my head!
    what you been eatin' up there in NY??
    i'm just askin' 'cause i wanna see if
    you can ship me some! :D

    ...this heah is tyght. umm hmm... dats ryght!

    :heart:
    SunShyne~
     
  4. N2urSoul

    N2urSoul Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Afri

    Ooooooh Wheeee!! I can't say no mo'!!

    (cept this'n be tyte) :D


    N2
     
  5. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    O'm goodness

    all i can say is ...........WoW! speechless:eek:
     
  6. cocobutterskyn

    cocobutterskyn Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Afri,

    Your poetry & delivery is TIGHT! You have Madd Skillz. :toast:

    Poetically Turn'd Out!
    CCBSKYN :heart:
     
  7. dnommo

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    tight crafting poet...good read

    one.
     
  8. Rashad

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    WELL ****!

    LET ALL HANG OUT POET!
    TYTE SCRIBE!:)
     
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    afri...this was tight......I like the way you got that mind stimulation going.......C'mon stimulate me some mo.
     
  10. j'hiah

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    this was tyte. dang.

    jh.
     
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