Black Poetry : That Picture

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by soulful2006, May 10, 2006.

  1. soulful2006

    soulful2006 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    THat picture is in my senoir book I put it there because
    even though I can't see your face in it its
    the last memeory of you that I have
    I wanted to kill the boy in front of you because
    All I got in the shot was the back of your head
    and that long brown hair I told you you couldn't cut anymore
    I remember when i met you I was probably one of the first peple who talked to you
    you told me that you got skipped up
    to the first grade and never went to kindergarten
    I thought that was cool
    Except that you missed out on the animal ********
    From then on you my quiet confidant
    I could tel you anything and it was all good
    I miss that
    I miss you Allyson
    You've been gone for two months and i still have to fight back tears
    over you
    you were one the purest people I know and you had to go
    i still feel like I shouldv'e died in your place
    So other people could get to know the beautiful you I knew
    I couldn't stand to look at yur little brother at the funeral
    I knew how close the two of you were
    you used to tell me how you and he would do just baout anyting to escape boredom
    I remeber when you got into the art magnet and you refused to go into humanites with me i wished you had
    I needed your encouragemnet in those classes
    what hurts the most is you had so much you wanted to do
    And its our senior year
    And you were so close to finishing
    And I miss you so much
    I can't even see what I'm writing because i'm crying so hard
    I tried really hard to be strong for everybody else but its too hard and I
    NEver got to mourn you the way I wanted to
    and nobody knows how much this hurts
    i'm scared to go to your grave sight because I can't
    Handle sitting here writing to you
    I wish you were here
    CAuse you're the only one who would know what to say to me when
    I'm like this
    you never had anything bad to say to anyone unless you were provoked
    And honestly I admired that because
    Its something I could never
    I've never wanted anyone to be alive more than you
    I remember looking at you in the cafeteria that friday
    Thinking to myself of how successful you would be once we got out of high school
     
  2. Khasm13

    Khasm13 STAFF STAFF

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    this was str8 crush...
    heartfelt joint...cause catz need to finish school...smh
    keep flowin

    one love
    khasm
     
  3. Randee

    Randee Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    i don't know what to say . . . you blew my mind with your cutthroat honesty. write through, write through, my deepest sympathy
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    whoaaaaaaa dat was heavy !
     
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    soulful2006 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thaks she was definetly one of my best friends and losing hr the way I did is something that will always hurt.
     
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    cursed heart Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    This was very touching and beautiful!
     
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