Black Poetry : That OTHER ish......

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by anotha_LEVEL, Sep 1, 2005.

  1. anotha_LEVEL

    anotha_LEVEL Active Member MEMBER

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    Man I'm on that other ish...
    Wanting to drop a load out my soul like I gotta take ANOTHER sh*t
    Click Click...... dial tone or a gun cocking back?
    Both going off in my head........ am I home or not?
    Whats making me spit a flow this hot?
    I don't know but I'm on that OTHER ish
    That butter sh*it.......... smoothe and strong
    I feel like producing songz with these words
    Dropping thongs with these words
    Go from tha hood to tha burbs traveling at light speed
    Smoking some light weed
    It is what it is..........
    That OTHER ish
    Uncovered scripts......
    Overlap in my mind making me spit that OTHER sh*t
    When others bit the apple........they never noticed her beauty
    Blinded by tha booty but forgot her core
    Myself....... I rather tickle her stem and cut her just right
    Slice her in fours........... open her doors
    Man I'm on that OTHER ish
    Feeling like I gotta take ANOTHER sh*t
    [email protected]........ I need to go to tha doctor because this feeling ain't proper.


    I'm on that other sh*t



    anotherLEVEL
     
  2. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    nothing wrong wit dat .....i hear ya on the another level
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Dropping that ish like it's hot, cause it is. Sometimes it just has to flow out strong like that. Flow on.
     
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    Sweet baby_face Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Nice, very nice.
    I like.....
    ......it......
    ...a lot.
     
  5. anotha_LEVEL

    anotha_LEVEL Active Member MEMBER

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    thanks a lot


    I'm from Detroit too.

    Wut area u from?
     
  6. Wisdom7

    Wisdom7 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Nice poem, especially the line w/the apple and the beauty at the core. Deep!
     
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    Kamau~ Active Member MEMBER

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    this was was butta creame smooth dude...
     
  8. Auroraflower

    Auroraflower Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    this was coolie..

    and beautifully :geek:


    you did what you had to do Iee ....


    let it all out....






    we here are quiet and listening...







    Loveauroraflower:heart:
     
  9. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    dropping it like this...i likes nice drop poet....Peace Angel