Quiet Poetry Lounge : That November Night

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  1. msloveangel

    msloveangel New Member MEMBER

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    [/SIZE]That November Night

    That November night
    Was a night of love
    A night that we shared together
    A night that wouldnt surrender

    So wrapped up in your charm
    Lost in your arms
    I was in a different world
    No longer facing harm

    You saved me from betrayal and lust
    You gave me love and your complete trust
    My eyes grew weak and my heart grew strong
    Somehow I knew I was yours all along

    The stars were shinning
    Oh so brightly
    The wind was winding
    Oh so tightly
    As the whole world seemed to disapear
    On that november night
    When you faught away my fears

    Somehow I felt that you could listen
    So I whispered my heart
    And your eyes glistened
    We were floating on skies
    On natural highs
    So special was that November night

    You saved me from betrayal and lust
    You gave me love and your complete trust
    My eyes grew weak and my heart grew strong
    Somehow I knew I was yours all along

    Showered with rain
    There we remained
    Kissing away the pain

    For a moment we stopped
    You looked at your watch
    And told me we should both stop

    I pried myself away
    Knowing that we both felt the same
    And said our good-byes in the pouring rain

    And i never felt the same
    On another night in the rain
    I guess that November night is left to blame[/SIZE][/SIZE]
     
  2. gempis

    gempis Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    WELCOME!!!!!!

    So nice to have you aboard. Really diggin your tight poem! Lookin forward to hearin more from ya, sistah. Make yourself at home. :D
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    welcome welcome welcome

    welcome to destee.com quiet flowz
    welcome to the house of love , peace & respect
    welcome from above as i bless u this love
    great write love the flow look to read more of u
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    This was a lovely scribe, sounds like a night to remember. Welcome to Destee, hope you enjoy your stay here.
     
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    queentswana Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Hi and welcome to the wonderful world of destee.com
    I like the piece you put before us. We know it's at lease "1" year of the month is very special to you. thanks for sharing and again welcome aboard.
     
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