Black Poetry : THAT NIGHT

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  1. AppleBottomBird

    AppleBottomBird Member MEMBER

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    as i get ready to leave my house
    i turn around and look at my mother
    and i said "goodbye, don't wait up"
    i then walked out the door and
    got into the car with my friends
    now this is my first time going
    out to a club, party seen...
    later that night this man
    asked me if he could by me
    a drink beings though i am
    20..i said no thanks..he then
    proceeds to follow my steps..
    at the time i didn't catch on to him..
    it was getting pretty late and the club
    was closing so my friends and i left..
    we then went out to eat and the same man
    just happend to walk in the door behind us
    he asked if he could sit with us and
    before i could say no, my drunk friend said
    sure...i was givin him no kind of attention
    when then ate and left the restuarant all
    going our seperate ways...at least we thought
    i reached home and went to go and open my door
    when the same man appeared out of nowhere..
    he approached me and began to touch me in a
    unfriendly way i then kicked him and opened my
    door and saw my mother standing in the hallway
    of my house and before i could close the door
    i heard this loud BANG!!!! before my eyes lye
    my mother bleeding from her head....the man
    got in his car and took off...the ambulance rushed
    her to the hospital and before my eyes in the
    back of the ambulance her soul left her body....
    NEVER WOULD I IMAGINE THAT A GOOD DAY WOULD TURN INTO THE WORST DAY OF MY LIFE....AND I WOULD NEVER HAD KNOWN THAT MY LAST WORDS THAT SHE WOULD HEAR WAS GOODBYE, DON'T WAIT UP.....WHAT IS WRONG WITH THE PEOPLE IN THE WORLD TODAY??? Y KILL 4 NO REASON....?
    A LOVIN' MOTHER------ALWAYS LOVED NEVER FORGOTTEN......
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    my soulful and humble caress goes out to you
    so often the maze of life and the fire of guns
    has taken a hold on society and destroying life's
    meanings and wonderful people .
    this was sad and sorry to hear such a thing
    i can feel this deep like an open wound
    my prayer goes out to you ............................
     
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    queentswana Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thanks for sharing a large part of your soul with us, our love will be your comfort. Stay blessed.
     
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    nevar Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    im just speechless at this point this was. im sorry this was very emotional for me. keep your head up baby gurl.
     
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    sweettee29 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    SUGA, ALL MY HEART GOES OUT TO YOU THIS WORLD IS AN UGLY PLACE AND IT IS WICKED MORE OFTEN THAN NOT YOU ARE IN MY PRAYERS BELIEVE THAT

    MUCH MUCH LOVE SWEETTEE29
     
  6. AppleBottomBird

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    To those who are showing me luv...thank you and god bless...it took me a while to let out my empty heart into words...it's been a while but i am back to let everyone feel what i have been living with...God Bless you all....
     
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    Tha-Emissary Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Killing for no reason or a reason are probably the two worse things on this earth. Killing period is abominable. My heart goes out to you and your family and remember faith in god can bring you through it all.
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I really don't have the words to say what I'm feeling, I'm still taken aback from what I've just read... All I can say at this point is that I truly am sorry, and that somehow, God has been holding your hand throughout all of this. It couldn't have been easy to pen these words. Peace to you and yours.
     
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