Black Poetry : that night

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by uplift19, Mar 28, 2006.

  1. uplift19

    uplift19 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    a deafening silence
    pierces my heart
    nothing even matters
    but this moment
    the sound of serenity
    speaks to me
    revealing unearthed truth
    in a shrieking still night
    the melody pulls us closer
    like a steady rhythm
    moving
    flowing
    feeling
    beckoning you to become one with me
    dam-n, can you feel it?
    I know you do
    because I can feel your heartbeat
    and every breath I breathe
    says you
    don't say a word
    because you know
    you can't explain it
    just sit back, relax
    enjoy it while it lasts
    because like all things
    this too shall pass
    but when the winter comes
    remember the calm, warm air
    of spring
    resting forever
    in your heart and soul
    whispering songs of me
     
  2. nevar

    nevar Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    this was a very tyte flo poet flo on.:welldone:
     
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    queentswana Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I can relate to a "that night" ...the flow was mellow, I like the way you laid this piece poet.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    A night i feel and know so well this was on point ...wow !

    Like sweet music playing
    my heart dance softly
    inside your radiant glist
    in that moment of silent
    the night fades
    feeling da breeze flowing
    warmth overcomes me
    i know this will pass
    like da stars above ...........
     
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