Black Poetry : that night

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  1. BaduX

    BaduX Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    as i stand near you
    i feel your tender touch
    run down my backside
    tracing the outlines of my body
    words only come out slurred
    and not aware of my body motions
    slowly moving closer and closer...
    than ever before
    eye to eye
    breath to breath
    chest to chest
    GOD knows this feels good
    soft kisses discovers
    my lips
    my kneck
    my breast
    my stomac
    then my inner thighs
    as i slowly knelt my head back
    with a silent scream
    then bitting my lip
    i slowly back up
    the bed over takes my fall
    i fall in the position of go...
    the silent music begins to play,
    he is doing the two step
    dancing to every beat my body makes
    as he finally finds mine. making music
    as one
    we are waiting for eternaty
    only wanting never to be done
     
  2. SensualReality

    SensualReality Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Like the energizer bunny.....
    feelin' this down to my toes:wink:
     
  3. Dior Robynsonne

    Dior Robynsonne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Hmmmmm is all I can say.
     
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    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    ok now
    this was tight
    and steamy
    flow on
    .....Angel
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    loved how this was displayed sweet flow
    i want mo mo mo !!!
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Gee, now that was sensual. Very nice.
     
  7. angelicsage

    angelicsage Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Oooooooooooooh....my

    this was so intense...

    so beautiful...

    so full of passion...

    wow...it just flowed so smoothly

    loving your work! Sister....loving your work!
     
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    triniti424 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    hmmm I see :look: lol hey sista its been a minute since i seen ya round...ya know i went down to fresno couple weeks ago..I didnt know yall had a ghetto in FRESNO :lol: j/k gurl LOL :) you know its all Love lolol
     
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    BaduX Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanx for the love...
    i havent been on for a minute
    thanx for the everlasting love
    trinti-> yes in deed fresno has a ghetto...i try to stay
    far away as i can...not to sound uppidy...i kno its all love sistah
    take care
    thanx fron the love of the family
    GOD BLESS
     
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