Black Poetry : That Mother's Day

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  1. EbonyQueen06

    EbonyQueen06 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    The most precious gift robbed from me
    Taken from me in just 30 seconds
    Not relizing there something else inside my body
    I thought it was his fingers
    I found out it was his dick
    I screamed "stop! get off of me"
    He got off, after 2 or 3 quick strokes
    I rode my bike with no teas in my eyes
    My jewels were just taken out of my jewelry box
    But I felt no emotion or pain

    Confused about what happened
    I walked around my parents like **** didnt' happened
    But your daughters no longer a virgin.
    She lost that **** to a boy
    That she only knew for one day
    I gave it up easier than Arithmatic math
    It was probobly all my fault

    Maybe I was the one who was wrong
    I went back there with him
    Like a 2 dollar hoo
    And let him drop my pants
    But he told me he "He didn't **** virgins"
    But I'm not suppose to listen to what ****** say
    They'll **** you faster than a collect phone call
    I guess it is all my fault

    Just a year ago I was a virgin
    And now I'm Living a lie about my none existing virginity
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    nice flow deep too
     
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    The way you put this together, this horrible scene, makes me feel just how gruesome this situation must be. Makes me wanna holla.
     
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    Hi EbonyQueen...
    I read this post about 4 times and I want to keep it real with you. We all know that it takes a whole "VILLAGE"...to raise a child. I'm not comming in this thread you wrote as a reply-re, but as a supply-er...hopefully. It deeply bothers me to know or read about a 16 year old childs body has been violated, so much to the point where it entwines and takes full control of your mind...on to the very pen you used to display such a scene. I noticed you called yourself a 2 dollar hoo, and that's not what your name displayed to me as "EbonyQueen" and I'm sure that you are a beautiful Queen and there are so many yooung ones in this family as I'm sure you are aware of. I however...love them all, and that certainly includes yourself. And if you ever feel like you want to talk to someone...I'll listen, why?...because you are my future, ...and I need you to guide be well. And please know I am only speaking out of love. Always remember that your "Worth"...cannot be bought for 2 dollars, a million dollars or all the gold in the universe. You are indeed,...a Queen in the making.

    much luv and concern...queentswana
     
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    EbonyQueen06 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Wow thank-u so much for all the love I really appricate it especially Queentswana I really appriciate your comment especially since I'm been dealing with this for the last year it's really hard to deal with this thank u
     
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    KEEP ya head up ma, walk thru life like it's yours and seize the day. You are a diamond and NOBODY can take that away from you.
     
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    Little sister, I wish you wouldn't be so hard on yourself. Even if you feel you made a mistake, or whatevah, you have to show yourself the compassion god shows you.

    Our wisdom as we grow older rests on the foundation of our errors and not knowing at the time. Our capacity to grow and enjoy a long life rests in our ability to let go of the past and look to the future.

    You are a beautiful young woman - just fly, baby. :grouphug:
     
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