Black Poetry : That Man...

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  1. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    The way he makes me feel
    Is unbelievable…just wit hello
    He calls me baby and got my spirit
    Singing…..
    The swag in my walk
    The passionate in my talk
    The love in my smile
    Is all him…
    Just the thought of him
    You can hear my passion yearn
    He moves my soul in depth…
    Deep in my bones come alive
    Like a love that will never die
    That soul to soul joint
    That cant be split
    Like a flame to fire
    A connection that takes my breath
    His voice penetrates my mind
    That pulls me each time
    He sets my depths on fire
    For he is my only desire
    A drug I cant resist
    Never meet a man that
    Had the power to take over my mind
    I lose my thoughts
    Feeling like I am
    …going insane
    Losing control
    What this man got…
    ….I don’t know
    Yet my being is yearning to learn
    The way he makes me feel
    Is unbelievable…

    (c) One Woman's Heart
     
  2. cherryblossom

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    I liked the whole, but THIS part was my favorite!

    This part made me go, "Mmm-hmmm!"

     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    In da depth of hearts the feelings of him embeded inside ya soul
    this was lovely and warm ..........wish i had these kinda effects on somebody !
     
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    Clyde C Coger Jr going above and beyond PREMIUM MEMBER

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    In the Spirit of Sankofa and Real Truth!




    MzBlkAngel2...it cannot be said any better, for real. You broke the mold with this write my sister friend

     
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    Ooh...

    I'm feeling this!
     
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    tay_tay225 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Sister, your words are inspirational. Your poem IS love, and it touched my heart more than any other poem I'd read before.

    I want you to hang on and keep believing that love exists, because there are many who have lost faith. Please hang in there.
     
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    I like!!! You're inspiring me to break out my typewriter and do somethin of poetry...:)
     
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    cocobutterskyn Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Hello MzBlkAngel...

    Its amazing how our feelings for someone can evoke such wonderful energy it pumps up our attitudes. I love the overwhelming happiness feeling of this piece!

    Nice write!

    MaddSistahlyLove!
    Coco :dance:
     
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    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thank you all for the love and happy you really enjoyed this poem.....