Black Poetry : That kind of loving it dont work for me...

LibertyLady

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Holland
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social worker...
i gotta girlfriend she just goes for the night ,she sucks the brothers to the curb and than leaves them behind.. :puke:
I got another friend ..he has a good wife but plays these undercover playthangs and kiss them good bye... :cool:
Than this other friend brothers take her ......all 5..
she say,s its for the rush,the kick ,the trill and the Vibes...:puke2:
And this other friend she asked me one time"' I,m doing sadomasochism.....
will you join me Tonight "" ??????????????????????????

and this is what i said....:eek:hmy::

Do whatever feels good... :teach: .
Do whatever feels fine....
whatever pleases you...
whatever fits you right....
Do what you need to...
Do whatever is you...
Do whatever you want to....
as long as Youre happy ..

hey ..its youre Life

but....


That kind of loving....
dont work for me...
That kind of loving..
wont fill my needs..
That kind of loving...
wont set me free..

That kinda Loving!..............................dont work for me....

I met This nice man... :smokin:
we were doing just fine....
untill he asked if this chick and i could kicking It Live!
Than this other man...yeah he was Real nice untill he gave me this plastic **** thang and said "'take me from behind" :jawdrop:
Than this funny man ,though he was mister right, than he said "'Enter My HareM ,than i have 10 wives"' :read:
And this other man said "'i,lll spend my life with you ,on one condition.........""

""""Ëvery hour we have to groove "" :deal:

What! and this is what i said,,, :teach: :teach:

Do whatever feels good....
Do whatever feels fine...
whatever pleases you...
whatever fits you right...
Do what you need To..
Do whatever is you...
Do whatever you want to...
as long as Youre happy its youre life but.......

that kinda loving...
dont work for me ...
that kinda loving..
wont fill my needs ..
that kinda loving..
wont set me free...
that kinda loving....


dont work for me
 
Sister, sister, sister! :lol:

I couldn't suppress a wry giggle when I read your piece. One because we all know sisters and brothers like the ones you wrote about all into the one night. Then second because your location says Holland and I've never been there, but one thing is true I've met those same brothers as the ones you had to handle. Sad commentary I guess, but really nice piece. You hang in there for the one with the right kind of lovin'! ;)
 
LOl thanks butter ....its nice that you got the poem
to be honest.....some Poems are not autobiograpic...

but i must say that some of the questions like......The chick and i could kickin it Life and stuff ............ :shades: ...lol

aww naw man.......


i,m going for the One ......man for the One thang.......LOL...


You know .......................ONE........



Love Liberty
 
Liberty Lady

This poem is so true. I know so many people like that...that it's ridiculous. Sexy just because....

I love this poem. Keep it coming, sweetheart. It's nice to see poems where we get back to the sincere and true reality of our being...and stop all of this fun stuff (using sex for fun). What you wrote is real. hugs.
 

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