Black Poetry : That gets me high

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by poeticbliss, Aug 21, 2002.

  1. poeticbliss

    poeticbliss Member MEMBER

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    In my search for finding that loving black man,
    To rub, caress, and hold my hand
    I confess that sometimes I use other substances to get me “high”
    But, nothing gets me there, like a black man’s hand on my thigh
    Looking me in my eyes and telling me he needs me
    Would do anything to keep me
    Would like to make my soul rest easy
    Wants to forever please me
    You see, nothing makes my emotions rise high like that
    Nothing is better than making love under the stars
    In the coolness of the summer breeze
    You, know that **** that lasts longer than 10 or 15 minutes
    That type of ecstasy that make your soul shiver
    The next day after your man has delivered
    Your soft place gets hot at the mere thought
    Of him coming home to give you more,
    Rushing through the bedroom door,
    No other high can compare,
    The type of vibe, that makes those women at work stare
    And wonder what you’re going home to.
    Because it’s got to more potent than any bottle of wine
    It’s better than going out to an elegant dinner,
    I’m talking about some one on one quality time
    ****, where is that Man of mine?
     
  2. poeticdelight

    poeticdelight Member MEMBER

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    Alright

    longer than 10 or 15 minutes huh??

    tight poem

    welcome :wave:

    pd :)
     
  3. poeticbliss

    poeticbliss Member MEMBER

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    Yeah, you know that kind that last all night long!!!
    Thanks for the comp!
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    well now from flyte i see u in write
    ya flow is a show and a beam of glow
    dat man u seek is ever so close
    but u my dear keep on da flowz
    as i welcome u within as family & friend......Tyght vibe
     
  5. elayne.

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    bliss.


    well done!! :)

    ...i wish i could give you a high5 for this
    one!! mmm hmmmm... i sho do know of
    what you speak... & that high is tru-ly
    untouchable... irreplaceable... alla dat!! :)

    thanks for sharing... & welcome!!

    itsallLove, chile.

    elayne.
     
  6. cocobutterskyn

    cocobutterskyn Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    If I haven't said welcome
    allow me to do so now, :wave:

    I enjoyed the flow of this and
    I look forward to enjoyin' more
    of your work.

    Scribeaboutit! It helps.
    Coco :heart:
     
  7. alyce

    alyce Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    say that, Poetess! (and hopefully, he's on the come)

    alyce
     
  8. blakverb

    blakverb Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    aw dammmmmmmn!!! you have done went and shut down the site with this...10-15 minutes...naw sis....45-60...like "****" type shiznit (I'm a bad man :) )

    tight scribe queen
     
  9. Reason

    Reason Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Dug this out to the end...

    Brilliantly crafted! Welcome...

    Reas
     
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