Black Poetry : That Chocolate Stuff

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by blakverb, Nov 1, 2003.

  1. blakverb

    blakverb Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I love that Chocolate Stuff
    that only a sister can give me
    that thing that Oreos envy
    that "right here daddy,
    ain't it sweet daddy, all on your
    palette daddy"
    Mocha latte caramel enhanced
    encounter of hips to lips

    I love that Chocolate stuff
    that "go tell it on the mountain"
    "yoodle lay he whoooooooooo"
    stuff...your recipe that Hershey
    stole stuff...that can't be replicated stuff/
    cause GOD made it stuff
    that Chocolate stuff...GODiva
    came the closest to your taste
    and she rode butt naked on
    a horse to do it

    I love that Chocolate stuff that
    thing that bunnies try and jump in
    on Easter stuff...that cherry's best friend
    stuff...that when it's cracked...runs all over
    my mouth stuff...

    and I lick it
    sl.......ow.......ly
    to let you know
    how much I
    ap...pr...ec...ia...te
    you

    cause I love your Chocolate Stuff.

    (c)2003 blakverb "off da top"
     
  2. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    wow very nice such words chocolate i c is yo favorite
     
  3. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    big ups to da chocolate factory
    dis was hot and off da hook
    flow on bruh ! verb :huh:
     
  4. Twofish

    Twofish Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    wow!

    now this is unexpectedly impressive ;)

    GREAT TO SEE YOU

    1luv
    2fish
     
  5. SwtT

    SwtT Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    :bomb: wow!!! nice to see you blak!
     
  6. cocobutterskyn

    cocobutterskyn Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    It's soul sweet to read you again...


    feelin'it souldeep!
    Coco :heart:
     
  7. the_story

    the_story Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    wooo...is it hot in here or is it jus me?:hot: this is the :bomb: blak keep it comin
    mcuh love,
    -story
     
  8. Jazz4u

    Jazz4u Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    :jawdrop: this was a nice ride...lol
     
  9. angelicsage

    angelicsage Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I absolutely love your work...
    I think that you could write about
    "anything" and it would flow sweeter
    than honey....

    Officially wowed!
     
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    Bluewater Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Wow
    Delightful
    is so many way
    very nice
    feeling this
    for real
    nice oh so nice
    Peace
     
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