Khasm13 : thas the time...

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  1. Khasm13

    Khasm13 STAFF STAFF

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    late in the wee hours
    when your scent reminds me
    of jazmine flowers
    or after a hot shower
    body steaming
    only you
    can have the recesses of my mind dreaming
    when still awake
    chilling just you and me
    by the lake
    how is it that you can take
    all of my senses
    and intensify them
    like magnifing lenses
    this isn't any schism
    i want to explore all of your
    colors like a prizm
    and hold you ever so close
    but you seem so far away
    traveling coast to coast
    when you play a poetic host
    i love you the most
    cause to me
    you are so fine
    and thas the time
    i feel like making love to you
    with my heart that is tru
    each time i look at you
    and hear you
    and touch you
    and smell you
    and taste you
    my soul is renewed...
     
  2. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    lovin dis flow
    this line....

    traveling coast to coast
    when you play a poetic host


    ok now...Angel
     
  3. BaduX

    BaduX Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    D@@@MN!!! :bowdown: :bowdown:
    had me speechless
    once i get myself back together!!!
    ima read this again like i gots some
    sense...had me screamin
    like i was @ a ginuwine conecert... :D
    (((yeah boy)))

    GOD BLESS :nuts:
     
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    gempis Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    ahhhhh, Khasm, I luvs it when ya bring out tha romantic side. this is straight up dope, brotha man. peace
     
  5. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    str8 tyte scribing poet
     
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    Smooth and sensuous, like the "Quiet Storm"!

    Very inviting piece, drew me into a scenario type vibe...
    and the "Plot" as they say thickens!!!!!!!!!! :hot: :hot: :hot:
    Blessings On Yours!
     
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    Bluewater Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    oh my Warrior this is bliss..:) oh yes it is :)
    deep from the heart:heart:
    Peace
    Blue
     
  8. triniti424

    triniti424 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    what a lucky sista...can I step in her shoes for a millisecond LoL

    strollin’ in the park watchin’ winter turn to spring
    the feel of your essence playin’ my heart strings
    inhaling the presence of you
    the spirit of you
    the eternal ethereal gift of you
    massaging my mental
    with your poetic elemental
    electricity
    something so strong can only be of thee
    all of creation brought into animation
    by the existence of… you
    only you
    can have my mind in a daze
    and my body ablaze
    how can you affect me so many ways?
    bonding my bliss with the light touch of a poetic kiss
    I find my nights consumed
    because your energy fills my room
    beckoning me to explore
    the many facets of your
    fascinating composition
    as my mind pursues me + you in endless bonded positions
    ohhh da visions
    but you seem so far away
    though so so very close
    in my mind
    all the time
    you delve into the unknown
    seeking the raw blak woman inside
    reducing my protective pride with every stride
    till you have what u sought to find
    the makings of me
    and thas the time
    I feel like making love to you
    with you
    for you
    until every inch of me is saturated …of you
    with all my heart that is oh so true
    with every sound of ya voice
    and every feel of ya spirit
    every glace of ya minds eye
    oh me oh my
    my essence is re-energized
     
  9. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Very romantic...this was sweet.
     
  10. angelicsage

    angelicsage Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Gathering my composure

    This piece was as the taste my favorite cookie...
    the scent & elegance of a "Cala Lilly".... my favorite flower
    the way butterflies would erupt when my lover said my name
    the passion I felt....
    when placing the first brush stroke to canvas
    the inspiration of a new poem birthed in my soul
    a rainbow after a summer storm
    the feeling of sand and ocean collapsing under foot

    whoever she is...I hope she knows how you feel
    this was so powerfully & beautifully scribed
    """please don't break my high and tell me it's fiction"""
    of course I wouldn't believe you anyway...because your
    vibe radiates from the page...

    I could read this over & over & over & over.... :sand: :sand: :sand: :sand: :sand:



    Oh & triniti....saturate on soulsister...this piece
    just seems to have that effect, I feel you girl...
     
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