Black Poetry : Thanks for Dinner

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by brotherman, Mar 24, 2002.

  1. brotherman

    brotherman Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I would like to thank you all for dinner
    and for inviting me
    thank you for coming thru
    inspite of the...
    new jack that I am in this vincinity
    if any be
    offended by my verbal audacity...
    ask destee
    and maybe she will see it as contrary
    or react in a manner displinary
    unneccessary
    cause the query shows my southern hospitality
    and this locality tends to suite my brute formality
    but on the strength of keeping it love
    for your replies
    even if you thought it was junk
    thanks for the lies
    and if you stayed and struggled
    with the structure
    or the flows
    your integrity for poetry -yes it shows
    would love to hang out
    a little longer
    drain my brain out
    ease some pain
    get all complaints out
    restrain from sleeping
    and conciously maintain

    but see, that mattress calls my name

    and uncle bob, brother of sam
    can't understand
    don't giveS a ****
    about my fam up here in destee's
    cause in the morning...

    I belong to the MAN

    so lets us work for little lucci
    cause lucci pays for little hoopty
    hoopty gets us where it fits us
    it's a
    daily b*tching circus

    but tonight I'll be alright
    sleep tight like
    the first night tina met ike
    and the next inspiration I get
    best believe I'm dropping it
    on this site
    so thanks
    again for dinner
    it seems
    I just can't thank ya'll enough
    mad shots to all my Griots
    and some of ya'll nymphos
    writing that ol' nasty stuff..(quote DMX "up in here, up in here!)

    ;)
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    glad u was at da table ya flow got great flava
    i feel ya beat of da man who don't understand
    our vibe that we scribe here on Destee so rest
    in wisdom and when ya ready to rep a nother
    remember ya brutha ova here ..........nice & tyght !!
     
  3. GA_Sunshyne

    GA_Sunshyne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Brotherman.


    i really liked this!!!! :D

    (just wanted to let you know!)

    :heart:
    Elayne.
     
  4. Rashad

    Rashad Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Bruh!

    Thanks for bringing yo dish Playa!
    It was good too!

    resting...
     
  5. mizdee2002

    mizdee2002 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    the reason i luv yo stuff...is cause u r always on some next ****!

    much luv
    dee
     
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    klabarron Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    speak on prophet speak on!! welcome to the fam brutha!!
     
  7. brotherman

    brotherman Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thanks for all this love ya'll.

    GA Sunshine, I will be giving you that response your poems -so deserve. Just haven't made it that way home yet (whisper "cause I like you, i mean, yours too).
     
  8. GYPSYMAN

    GYPSYMAN Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Bro. Poet

    U got skillz extra ...original type style 4 real.. peace poet.

    g-man
     
  9. Danilyn

    Danilyn Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    They serve it up real good up
    in this joint! Glad you're gettin
    comfy and enjoying yourself :D
     
  10. brotherman

    brotherman Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thank you too D

    I am trying to be in here for real, no doubt.
     
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