Black Poetry : Thanks 4 my pillow!

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  1. reggaediva

    reggaediva Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I prayed last night and asked the GOD to send me a good man,
    Not no thug, no srub, just a brother with a plan.
    I know that I have alot of s#$% with me,
    but does that mean that I have to be lonely.
    As i rose in the morning to see another day,
    Then i look right next to me only to see
    a fluffy pillow and an empty ashtray.
    But wait let me think I need to know,
    I had ask GOD for a man and got a pillow.
    I got up out the bed and got myself together.
    As I looked outside I knew I would need my leather.
    I had prayed so hard the night before,
    And here I am manless walking out my front door.
    WAIT A MINUTE!
    I'm a single black woman with MY OWN S@$#!
    I'm don't really NEED a man that I would have to put up with.
    I need to show my gratitude to GOD for listening to my prayer,
    And here I am showing no care.
    I got exactly what I had asked for
    someone to put up with my ego.
    It's me GOD, THANKS FOR MY PILLOW.
     
  2. true love

    true love Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    This was really tight, and I can totally relate on so many levels. much love to you for this piece.
     
  3. reggaediva

    reggaediva Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    My First Orgasm!

    I wasn't a virgin I had done this before,
    Maybe not with the same man,
    I was 18 and he was 24;
    So does that make a whore.
    We weren't serious this was just a thing,
    You know one of them "after da club" kinda fling.
    We were in his barracks room watching midnight love,
    Then he started kissing all the right places;
    And ladies, you know how we throw our heads up and start looking at whats above.
    Now at this point we were coming out of our clothes,
    I thought to myself he talk all that **** he better not be sorry,
    Well hell that's why I'm glad I drove.
    Now at this point brother is doing the **** thing,
    LL Cool J's DOIN IT is what I wanted to sing.
    I was all into it, brother had me grabbin all on his bed,
    **** I feel like I'm bout to melt.
    Yo word, it felt like I just peed in his bed.
    Next thing I know he's flipping me over and starts giving me head.
    He comes back up; and whispers in my ears;
    "You taste so sweet, I haven't had it like this in years!"
    By this time I can't even move,
    I'm only 18, nobody ever told me about this kinda groove.
    I rubbed my hands across the sheet, Hoping that it wasn't pee.
    He's looking at it too, Then smiles and say;
    You got yours I see!!.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    feeling ya emotions in this one
     
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    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    just emoitons flowin
    tight drop
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    God knows us better than we do...flow on, I'm reading.
     
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    krazelyricks Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    oh my......both of these poems were VERY tyte......I'm feelin yo flava....dang....what can I say I'm just speechless
     
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