Black Poetry : Thank You

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Destee, Mar 21, 2001.

  1. Destee

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    i invited you to flow with me
    caught up in the excitement of poetry
    if i'd taken the time, read all of your lines
    fear would have kept me from posing
    such a question to one so engrossing

    your work is filled with sweet spirit
    providing hope where it no longer visits
    true friend, true love and true passion
    are your obvious choice and fashion
    i'd not be surprised if you didn't agree
    as your work is bound in humility

    thank you for saying yes, accepting my invitation
    allowing me this bliss, this wonderful sensation
    of sharing a page, a poem, a moment
    with one who's been blessed and annointed

    i'll be reading all of your work
    imagining you're talking to me
    to fantasize of this
    that alone is a gift
    one with the power to lift
     
  2. GA_Sunshyne

    GA_Sunshyne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    destee.....

    sis... this was wonderful!
    but... umm... i got 3 words 4 ya...

    "who is he?!!" (lol)

    NothinButLove...
    Sunshyne~
     
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    Amun-Ra Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Too Sweet!

    This says so much and so sweetly--I must say that now I will be watching so I can see who this is--you've certainly got my interest--well done poet--Ra
     
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