Black Poetry : Thank You

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by thespokesman, Apr 7, 2004.

  1. thespokesman

    thespokesman Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thank You

    For taking the time
    To read a rhyme
    From a dime
    Lost from the pack that makes dollars
    Now it’s time for me to subset
    Into the sunset

    See I wrecked
    Who you gon see
    When u see the word
    I leave this word
    Get some cash
    Get some face
    Learn how to face immeasurable odds
    Not to show a façade
    I wish everyone was in peace with God
    I know its hard
    But don’t lose hope
    Miracles happen
    Everyday
    A young kid is born

    And that is the celebration
    In itself
    The world evolves
    And elopes
    With kindred feelings of others
    Soon stranger become brothers
    Often smothered
    By other lovers
    That critique
    What’s so unique
    Is it bleak
    To understand one’s feet
    Their feat is to express
    One’s feet
    In the valley
    Of the shadow
    That persists since scrolls
    The undefined line grows
    And rolls
    Into hills of thunder
    And cries light into the sky
    After the word rains

    Holla at the boy
    Tainted Platinum 2k4

    One question
    What’s life after platinum?
    2k5
     
  2. thespokesman

    thespokesman Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    late night

    Late Night

    Ohhhh
    This da boy
    Roomtime

    Ok, what the deal
    When the spots cold
    Space in the sheets
    The mattress
    Saying you don’t miss him
    What a actress
    How u flippin
    Sayin u ain’t miss him
    Knowing you trippin
    U should a held him
    When he glue on his hands
    And crafting love on his mind
    Now u misprouncing lost conversations
    Like is-land
    His land, was stated to be your land
    But u couldn’t stop clubbing
    Looking at strippers
    Then u really got a hard body
    When he stripped ya
    Of the title as his girl
    The one boo
    Now you got a ghost laying next to you
    Boo
    But that ice was right
    In good light
    But when things got dark
    Who looking afta your heart
    And best interest
    U hold a body pillow
    And remember the tempest

    To celebrate poetry month.

    i had to get back at yall
     
  3. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    not this here was too tyte u laid it out on da red carpet
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Flowin with 2 pieces here. The first one made me think about strength, the second one made me think of missing what ya can't have, you put the word out there, keep flowin.
     
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    Bluewater Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    very nice indeed
    smiling...nice one and two :)
    much love
    Peace
    BlueWater:heart:
     
  6. thespokesman

    thespokesman Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanks for the luv
     
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