Black Poetry : Thank You

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  1. whisper

    whisper Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    For not hiding my shame
    for calling me out my name
    for playing games
    to keep me insane

    For the picking me up off the ground
    for only to be knocked back down
    to puppet me and make me clown
    to have me around .....only with a frown

    for wrecking my life and causing rage
    for saying" i'm only going through a stage"
    (you not me)

    Thanks for the kicks,the scratches,the don't talk back
    Thanks for being so d--- whack
    thank you for these things made YOU weak
    Didnt you notice i had two feet
    the shame the game
    the out of my name
    only bought me self woth and self fame

    down on the ground clown with a frown
    you stupid fool guess what i found

    ME.
    my shadow got you confused
    with all your abuse
    it turned out to be of NO USE
     
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    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    this was very nice...
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    lovin ya flow ya bringing it poeticly sweet
    tyte
     
  4. whisper

    whisper Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanks mzblkangel and $rich$
    i appreciate your thoughts
     
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    I'm not 100 percent sure how you meant it, but I can read this two ways, whisper. Most obvious is the sarcasm way. The thank YOU. The other way is with genuine sincerity. I feel this piece because I do thank my ex on one level. It's because of her that I don't put up with any crap anymore. Her abusiveness has made me a stronger and better person today. Does that make sense? Anyway, I like this flow.
     
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    mmmmhmmm thank you too...for letting go in ya flow :)
     
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    whisper Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanks family. Gempis we are on the same page i do thank him for making it rough for me but at the same time i learned from it too. if you read my thread in relations -" ten years of mental scars' you will understand . thanks for feeling it.
     
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    very inspirational...

    that which doesn't break us...

    "Does make us stronger"...

    let it flow...
     
  9. Deasia

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    YES! Tyte flow.

    I to thank all the
    game playas that
    caused me to
    kick it up a notch
    to ball my @$$ off
    to be the person i am today.

    THANKS!
     
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    wow
    very deep flow
    Much love to you
    Peace
     
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