Quiet Poetry Lounge : Thank You Very Much...

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by tashatoya, Mar 28, 2005.

  1. tashatoya

    tashatoya Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    All i can say to you is Thank You Very Much
    For your Loving, Understanding, and Caring
    For me, for opening my eyes to a better
    Understanding, for showing me that this
    Is deeper than the surface and that
    Making me realize that i am in Love
    Thank You Very Much and as far as
    Up above goes, i give the Highest Power
    So much thanks for blessing us with
    This kind of Love, the kind that i thought
    I'd never find, they say all good things
    Come through time, and if i had to do it
    All over again and wait twice as long for you to come...
    I would, because that's just what you do
    To me, putting all nouns, verbs, debates and
    Politics aside, because you don't have
    To understand all that, because you
    Understand me, and that's all that matters
    Because you make me more complete
    And better than i was before
    I can't begin to Thank You anymore than
    What i already have, i Love you,
    Embrace you, and I'll stay with you
    Forever, and stay lingering for your touch
    All i can say to you is
    Thank You Very Much...
     
  2. queentswana

    queentswana Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    This moved me to a smile, because if someone means that much to us, why not give thanks, too them and ...the most high
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    ..."because that's just what you do
    To me, putting all nouns, verbs, debates and
    Politics aside, because you don't have
    To understand all that, because you
    Understand me, and that's all that matters"

    These lines in particular captured me. To be understood by that special someone, is truly a reason to say thank you. I enjoyed this piece.
     
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    so sweet and beautiful this warms my heart
    lovin the flow and style u pose

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    AHMOSE Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    The thanks are all mine poet thanks for this drop
     
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    lilcherry76 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    well sis, i see you posted this, beautiful as your poetry always is, drop a few more, don't be shy--you're in the family now-----so how about that chocolate jello? ;) peace
     
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    Aw, this is so beautiful and sweet at the same time. Very nice drop.
     
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