Black Poetry : ...thank you for hurting me...

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  1. LovelyGoldenOne

    LovelyGoldenOne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    this is a song i wrote...hope u enjoy...

    verse 1:

    Thank you for hurting me baby

    Thank you for making me cry

    Thank you for all the lies baby

    Cuz now im done wiping my eyes

    Thank you for betraying me baby

    Thank you for stripping me down

    All the nights I cried constantly

    Needing you to hold me and love me now



    Chorus:

    I’ve let go

    Of that hold you had on me

    I finally let go

    And let my God start to use me

    I let go

    And gave into all vulnerability

    And through all the pain through the tears over the year

    I’ve really found me



    verse 2:

    Thank you for disappearing baby

    Thank you for bringing me down

    Thank you for making me deny

    That you would always be around

    Baby I know that you want me

    And maybe you’ll get another chance

    And you be thanking me baby

    For showing you how to treat a woman



    Chorus:

    I’ve let go

    Of that hold you had on me

    I finally let go

    And let my God start to use me

    I let go

    And gave into all vulnerability

    And through all the pain through the tears over the year

    I’ve really found me



    Bridge:

    now don't get me wrong

    ill remember all the good times

    don't get me wrong

    ill remember the times we laughed

    don't get me wrong

    ill remember the intimacy

    but baby ive moved on

    so stop trying to come back me
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    wow .....i like sis..
     
  3. nevar

    nevar Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    love how you put it down sis flo on.:hearts2:
     
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    Whata tear-jerking song this is. Nice write poet:)
     
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    choclatangel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    very talented...I enjoyed this alot.
     
  6. LovelyGoldenOne

    LovelyGoldenOne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanks for the comments everybody :)
     
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