Black Poetry : Thank u mama

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  1. A007

    A007 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Brought forth thru
    lust as much as love
    i was conceived with
    no predestined plan

    I was made
    without thought
    of what i would become

    But yet and still u loved me

    I messed up goals
    that u had
    I destroyed dreams
    that u you
    could have acheived

    But yet and still u loved me

    You treated me like the
    joy of your life
    You gave me all of you
    and for that mama
    I thank you

    You could have chose
    to not take the responsibliity
    You could have given
    me up

    Instead u loved me
    more than you loved
    yourself

    All that you had
    I had....and more
    You went to the ends
    of the earth
    BY YOURSELF
    for me
    and for that mama
    I thank you

    With a love as unconditional
    as the Lords love for us
    you gave me you

    You provided everything
    that i needed
    and most that i wanted

    You went without
    so i could have
    and there is no way
    possible i could repay you

    You are my mama

    Many mother children
    but that doesn't make them
    Mamas

    Many father children
    but that doesn't make them
    Daddys

    And even though i can
    never say or do enough
    to let you know that
    what you did for me
    BY YOURSELF
    I truly appreciate
    I will try to make you proud

    I will continue to try
    to honor you
    because you honored
    me

    I need you to know
    that i will forever
    be your son
    I will forever
    be grateful
    I will forever
    be thankful
    for what you did
    for me

    I love you as much
    as life itself
    and
    I thank you mama

    Not only for
    what you did
    but also for
    the things you didn't do

    THANK YOU MAMA
     
  2. MoEffective

    MoEffective Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Makes Ya Think

    That was tight and right in the words man.
    You made me realize how special my mother is to me as well.
    Thanks for the lesson in life:
     
  3. A007

    A007 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    THANX MO

    MOEFFECTIVE BEFITS YOUR WORDS

    You inspire with your flows. They are super superb supreme
    flows that the R would be proud of. I am honored that u read
    my work and i appreciate the feed back.
     
  4. MoEffective

    MoEffective Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    ARE YOU REALLY??

    You're honered?
    Well thank you!
    But I must return the words
    Reading such magnificent artistry
    Makes me yearn for your next work


    HIT US WITH ANOTHER
     
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    wow A007

    L O V I N G every single line of this

    thank you

    :heart:

    Destee
     
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    Da Street So'ja Banned MEMBER

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    when you young

    and living with you mama, all the noise don't pay the light bill, but now you're on your own you see mama wasn't all the bad, and show this to your mama she'll respect you for it

    good stuff 7

    Peace
     
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