Quiet Poetry Lounge : THA WAY I FEEL

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  1. PLATINUMILLITY1

    PLATINUMILLITY1 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    IM SO TIRED
    IM SO SICK
    OF THIS S***
    I DEAL WIT
    ITS LIKE IM DYING
    CUZ IM TRYING
    SO HARD TA KEEP FIGHTING
    THA HURT THA PAIN
    EVERYDAY ITS THA SAME
    I WONDER WEN ITS GUNNA CHANGE
    BUT THIS IS MY LIFE
    AND I FEEL LIKE IM BEIN CUT WITTA KNIFE
    IM PRAYIN THA LORD SAVES MY LIFE
    AND AT NIIGHT WEN I CRY
    I JUST WISH I CULD DIE
    N FLY AWAY FROM THIS LIE
    BUT NO,
    THE HURT KEEPS HURTIN
    AND THA PAIN KEEPS BURNIN
    THA WORLD IZ STILL TURNING
    AND FOR ME THA DEVIL IZ YEARNIG
    IM SO SAD AND SO SCARED
    BUT STILL NOBODY CARES
    AND STILL NOBODYS THERE
    IM SO COLD AND ALONE
    BUT NO LOVE AT ALL IZ SHOWN
    NOT EVEN FROM THA PHONE
    WHY CANT THEY ALL SEE
    THAT IM SO UNHAPPY
    AND THIS ISNT THA WAY IT SHULD BE
    I REALLY DONT KNO
    BUT I WANNA LEAVE N GO
    TO WHERE THA LOVE WILL SHOW
    YOUR WONDERING HOW I KEPT THIS ALL SEALED
    BUT YOU WULD BE ABLE TO C IF UR EYEZ WERE PEALED
    NOW U SEE, ITZ JUS THA WAY I FEEL
     
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    ibrahim Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    You are unhappy,
    but you never know
    how you put a smile
    on my face when you come around.
    I'd trade my smile in turn for you saddness
    B-cos platinum, i am smitten.
     
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    bigdrizzle Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Hey Platty...I hate 2 admit it..but..I be feelin' like that all the time it seemz...So I feel ya pain....Thanx 4 tha real sh*t...

    Peace
    Drizzo
     
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    nevar Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    i feel ya plat. flow on sista.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    Home is home away from home
    where love abide and await u here
    i would take your unhappiness in
    trade for that smile and a moment
    of time to relax listen intently wit
    care to let you know my heart is
    there, what seem so hard i would
    carry the load so u can breath freely
    i would compromise you hope for
    all the false tales told and mold every
    day into warmth only if i could i would
    shower u in grace and replace sadness
    with joy to fulfill that smile .....I feel u deeply sis.
     
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    Desert Storm Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I SEE STRENGTH
    COME OUT OF THE GRAVE
    I SEE VICTORY ON THE HORIZON
    SUCH AN EPIPHANY
    REALIZING THE WAY
    SOMETIMES WISH I COULD ESCAPE
    ALL DA WAY TO AFRICAS CAPE
    SOMETIMES WISH THAT I COULD DISSIPATE
    FRUSTRATION ELATIONS OF EMOTIONS RELATE
    GIRL YOU A DIAMOND
    PRICELESS
    RICH EBONY BLACK DIAMONDS
    SO PRECIOUS CAN'T YOU SEE
    YOU A GEM
    IT'S YOUR DESTINY
    even though YOU think your on a limb
    ALL I SEE IS

    B
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    KEEP SHINING.... SOMETHING'S ARE SO RARE IN LIFE... AND YOU ARE ONE OF THEM. TAKE SOME TIME TO SEE HOW BEAUTIFUL YOU ARE....

    OUT OF IT ALL YOU REALIZE WHO YOU ARE! AND WHOSE YOU ARE ... LOOK UP.. GOD'S GOT IT ALL... really feeling this one poet thank you... D.S.
     
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    Tantrum Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Hey Now
    You guys are flowing
    Poet of the week
    Much Love Poets
     
  8. PLATINUMILLITY1

    PLATINUMILLITY1 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    AAAAWWW U GUYZ UR GUNNA MAKE ME:crying: !!!!!!!
    BUT THIS IZ FOR YALL!!!!!

    IF I WAKE UP ALONE
    IF I WAKE UP SAD
    I KNO I CAN COUNT ON YOU
    TO SEND IT ALL TO THA PAST
    WITH UR WORDZ I AM TAKEN
    NO MISTAKE WAS MAKEN
    WEN I CAME INTO THIS WORLD
    THIS BEUTIFUL BLACK KINGDOM
    THAT MAKE MY HEART SOAR(NOT SORE FOR ALL DA GHETTO FOLKZ LOL)
    ALL OF YOU PRECIOUS MARBLES
    AND ALL OF YOU GLOWING PEARLS
    MAKE THIS TRIALED RHINESTONE
    SPARKLE LIKE A GEM
    I WISH I COULD DO MORE
    BECUZ UV GIVEN ME SO MUCH
    I GOTTA STEP IT UP FOR THIS
    BECUZ ITS MY HEART U ALL HAVE TOUCHED
    TOTAL STRANGERZ BECAME MORE FAMILY
    THAN MOST OF THE PEOPLE CLOSEST TO ME
    I WISH I CULD KISS AND HUG
    EVERY SINGLE PERSON ON DESTEE
    BECUZ WUTCHU HAVE GIVIN ME
    IZ A PLACE I CAN CALL HOME
    A PLACE THAT LIVES ON
    SO U SEE
    THA WORDZ THAT UV GIVEN TO ME
    ARE NOT EVEN WORDZ AT ALL
    THEYRE FOOTPRINTS
    GLOWING FOOTPRINTS
    IM MY MIND HEART SOUL AND BODY

    THANK YOU ALL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
    MUUUUUUUUUUAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHZZZZZZZZZZZZ
     
  9. PLATINUMILLITY1

    PLATINUMILLITY1 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    AZ A MATTA OF FACT IM GUNNA MAKE A THREAD FOR THAT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
     
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    Mos welcome, i've felt luv pain before, when it cease to remain, i still endured, realizing that my luv was finally cured, by jesus touch, restored. luv ya gurl,keep ya head up AND YA DREAMS!
    D.S.
     
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