Black Poetry : Tha Realness........please peep...im a open up a lil more.....

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  1. LURK

    LURK Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    yo yo...here we go 1nce again....
    its lurk....always rhymin to tha end....

    yo...im a open up a lil more for ya.......

    my flows vicous...i always expose tha realness....
    why you wanna oppose this kid....???
    dunny i aint kiddin'.....yo feel this.....
    call me tha butcher,how i open ribs...
    notice this.....Lurk got mo' flows to give....
    you must be high to come and test me...
    so sober up quick..
    i'll crunch ya bunch of invalids like a nestle....
    easy as smokin a spliff.....
    this is tha time for you start realizing why??
    theres some crayzie people out there ,just gunnin' 4 lives....
    runnin' on dimes....gas for tha soul in tha hood...
    we put our ***** on tha lines....hustlin' sacks for tha pie...
    if i could find anotha way i would...
    soo dont mistake me for a thug-- i'm only an artist that would be
    plain happy going wood...(hope ya understand thAT!!)
    who gon back me when i do good...???
    fans or friends??fam come out tha~ wood works again....
    talk about,"good Lurk,you're in.."
    "can u spot me some cash."..yeah i'll be glad to.....
    but lemme ask you,
    where tha hell were you when i stressed and had no ends..???
    almost left out 4 dead....anotha zombie put to unrest...
    walkin tha streets.....str8 up....talkin to beats
    like a song was my only friend.....head all in tha sheets...
    creating......... musical scribes for all to see......
    i know i'm a lil jumpy but dagwie just com~pre~hend...
    was fine droppin rhymes but they put me on tha hot~seat~then..
    i got alotta pressure buildin' up --layin on a hos-pi-tal bed....
    docs watchin me again.....i commited diag-nos-tical sins.....
    and now my pops' readin' my will...out to my fam...
    a str8 nightmare...thinkin' bout how it will end.....
    every child born in sin....with that...Lord please forgive me..
    i know i did wrong but that rawness is still in me......
    i aint flawless yet i try ta be......wish i was...happily married...
    got a babygirl....mi solamente amor.....(my only love)
    i guess i couldnt be..~happily married...
    cause trust is deep issue...
    mess up..and shorty'll be...reachin for tissues....
    after tha tears done gone she'll be seeking to diss you.....
    so now you're keeping a pistol..tucked under ya arm....
    thinkin tha worlds out ta get you and bring you some harm...
    its a known fact......sell drugs ,and see if your phone tapped...plus a
    bad girl to good can happen.....but a good girl to bad,
    there aint no goin back........


    ^^^^my life^^^^^

    look out for this...i'll be puttin an audio link up for u guyz.,...
    i know not all will relate but i hope ya could feel me.....pain is real......
    and love is pain..............


    one love to all a you guys who supported me throughout my hard times...
    just by replyin and giving me feed back helped alot...

    RICH...COCO.....AALIYAHMONET.....POETICALLYSPEAKIN....TRINITI..hey girl??!!
    DA STREET SO'JA.....my main man......KHASM...one of tha illest and realist....
    THERES A WHOLE LOT OF YOU GUYS........GOT A LOT ON MY MIND SO I CANT NAME U ALL.....
    BUT CONTINUE TO INSPIRE.............PEOPLE LIKE ME NEED YA INSPIRATION...!!!!


    peace.....Lurk.....~1~







    anothaonthaspotproduction...........2003......DESTEE family..........
     
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    Sweet baby_face Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    LURK this is so real. U got me all speechless
     
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    i READ THIS EARLEIR AND THEN HAD TO READ AGAIN IN ORDER TO REPLY AND YET STILL I AM SPEECHLESS. Lurk, you shattered the mold of honest, real poetry. Hot DAM
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    indeed i felt all of it too so real
     
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    :deal: i like this one hea
    keep doin the [email protected] thang
    GOD BLESS :angel1:
     
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    :wave: Haaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaay Brother LURK :wave:

    Very Nice Work !!! You Inspire Me !!!

    Would love to hear this live ... on the mic ... in voice chat !!!

    :birthday: Happy New Year !!!! :birthday:

    :heart:

    Destee
     
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    THANX GUYZ FOR THA FEEDBACK.....
    I REALLY DO APPRECIATE IT.....THATS WHUT KEEPS ME GOING SOMETIMES....
    AND DESTEE,IF U SEE THIS,
    I WILL BE SOON......ALL I NEED IS MY OWN COMP.......AND I WILL BE ON THERE....TRUST THAT LOVE........

    MORE FEED BACK WOULD BE APPRECIATED.....
    IF THIS MADE U THINK ANYTHING...LET IT BE KNOWN....
    I'M A MAN,TRUST THAT I COULD TAKE CRITICISM......
    LOL.......


    ONE LOVE...AND STAY UP YO....
     
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    like destee said dun...
    you inspire us too...
    felt those dawg...
    keep spit'n venom
    one love
    khasm
     
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    Lurk... the entire peace rocks!
    but these verses are funky!

    "call me tha butcher,how i open ribs...
    notice this.....Lurk got mo' flows to give....
    you must be high to come and test me...
    so sober up quick..
    i'll crunch ya bunch of invalids like a nestle...."

    "theres some crayzie people out there ,just gunnin' 4 lives....
    runnin' on dimes....gas for tha soul in tha hood...
    we put our ***** on tha lines....hustlin' sacks for tha pie...
    if i could find anotha way i would...
    soo dont mistake me for a thug-- i'm only an artist that would be
    plain happy going wood...(hope ya understand thAT!!)"

    keep doin' wha'chu do &
    holla at cha' boi for me.

    feelin'it souldeep!
    Coco :heart:
     
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    NO DOUBT COCO!!!!
    THATS LOVE GIRL....
    OH I DID HOLLA AT HIM ONE DAY FOR YOU AND HE TOLD ME HE WAS TALKIN TO U ON THA PHONE...I THOUGHT THAT WAS KINDA BUGGED OUT BUT YA KNOW!!!GOD WORKS IN MYSTERIOUS WAYZ....LOL...!!!!

    KEEP IN TOUCH.......STAY HEALTHY.....

    ONELOVE..................................................... :spin:
     
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