Quiet Poetry Lounge : Tha Realness.....I'm opening up a lil more...

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by LURK, Dec 30, 2003.

  1. LURK

    LURK Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    yo yo...here we go 1nce again....
    its lurk....always rhymin to tha end....

    yo...im a open up a lil more for ya.......

    my flows vicous...i always expose tha realness....
    why you wanna oppose this kid....???
    dunny i aint kiddin'.....yo feel this.....
    call me tha butcher,how i open ribs...
    notice this.....Lurk got mo' flows to give....
    you must be high to come and test me...
    so sober up quick..
    i'll crunch ya bunch of invalids like a nestle....
    easy as smokin a spliff.....
    this is tha time for you start realizing why??
    theres some crayzie people out there ,just gunnin' 4 lives....
    runnin' on dimes....gas for tha soul in tha hood...
    we put our ***** on tha lines....hustlin' sacks for tha pie...
    if i could find anotha way i would...
    soo dont mistake me for a thug-- i'm only an artist that would be
    plain happy going wood...(hope ya understand thAT!!)
    who gon back me when i do good...???
    fans or friends??fam come out tha~ wood works again....
    talk about,"good Lurk,you're in.."
    "can u spot me some cash."..yeah i'll be glad to.....
    but lemme ask you,
    where tha hell were you when i stressed and had no ends..???
    almost left out 4 dead....anotha zombie put to unrest...
    walkin tha streets.....str8 up....talkin to beats
    like a song was my only friend.....head all in tha sheets...
    creating......... musical scribes for all to see......
    i know i'm a lil jumpy but dagwie just com~pre~hend...
    was fine droppin rhymes but they put me on tha hot~seat~then..
    i got alotta pressure buildin' up --layin on a hos-pi-tal bed....
    docs watchin me again.....i commited diag-nos-tical sins.....
    and now my pops' readin' my will...out to my fam...
    a str8 nightmare...thinkin' bout how it will end.....
    every child born in sin....with that...Lord please forgive me..
    i know i did wrong but that rawness is still in me......
    i aint flawless yet i try ta be......wish i was...happily married...
    got a babygirl....mi solamente amor.....(my only love)
    i guess i couldnt be..~happily married...
    cause trust is deep issue...
    mess up..and shorty'll be...reachin for tissues....
    after tha tears done gone she'll be seeking to diss you.....
    so now you're keeping a pistol..tucked under ya arm....
    thinkin tha worlds out ta get you and bring you some harm...
    its a known fact......sell drugs ,and see if your phone tapped...plus a
    bad girl to good can happen.....but a good girl to bad,
    there aint no goin back........


    ^^^^my life^^^^^

    look out for this...i'll be puttin an audio link up for u guyz.,...
    i know not all will relate but i hope ya could feel me.....pain is real......
    and love is pain..............


    one love to all a you guys who supported me throughout my hard times...
    just by replyin and giving me feed back helped alot...

    RICH...COCO.....AALIYAHMONET.....POETICALLYSPEAKIN....TRINITI..hey girl??!!
    DA STREET SO'JA.....my main man......KHASM...one of tha illest and realist....
    THERES A WHOLE LOT OF YOU GUYS........GOT A LOT ON MY MIND SO I CANT NAME U ALL.....
    BUT CONTINUE TO INSPIRE.............PEOPLE LIKE ME NEED YA INSPIRATION...!!!!


    peace.....Lurk.....~1~







    anothaonthaspotproduction...........2003......DESTEE family..........
     
  2. Bluewater

    Bluewater Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    this is cool Lurk..flow it
    Peace
    Blue :heart:
     
  3. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    indeed LURK and i feel u more then u know
    i too been on the mental ride
    I'm always here to support and uplift da spirit
    peace unto u LURK
    holla if u need me
    tyte drop
     
  4. LURK

    LURK Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    ^^^^LOL..^^^THANX RICH....BUT I DID....AND U NEVER GOT BACK...LOL...ITS ALL GRAVY THO DAWG...U WERE PROLLY TOO BUSY CHATTIN UP THEM HUNNIEZ.....!!!
    HAHAHA
     
  5. LURK

    LURK Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    THANKS CINDY...THAT MEANS ALOT....KNEW ALL ALONG,BUT JUST NOW APPLYING THAT KNOWLEDGE.....
    I APRRECIATE WHUT YOU HAD TOP SAY TO ME.....THANX A BILLION FOR CHECKIN THIS OUT....

    ~1~
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    i 'm free now !
    i hear ya bruh
     
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    Keep those beats and rhymes coming, we'll be here.
     
  8. jazzymoonchild

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    Lurk,

    This was tight. Reminded me of ol
    school freestyle battes. Keep your head
     
  9. MzBlkAngel

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    tight drop
    i hear ya ...
    flow it!!!!
     
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