Black Poetry : Testosterone Coma

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by twision, Aug 21, 2006.

  1. twision

    twision Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I'm a man's man
    And every woman's dream
    I stand on 3 strong legs
    If you know what I mean
    I drink testosterone
    From steel plated cups
    My head is made from meat
    My ego is made from sluts
    I'm all logic, no emotion
    I'm left brained, I'm king
    I have no use for tears
    No need to feel anything
    My world is competition
    I'll only fight a weaker man
    And feast upon his dignity
    Only because I can
    I'll never admit defeat
    I'm too proud, too strong
    I have to be in control
    Or else everything goes wrong
    I'll never have an equal
    Because I'm better than the best
    And I dare anyone who breathes
    To put my testosterone to the test!
     
  2. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    very nicely done poet feeling ya flow
     
  3. queentswana

    queentswana Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Estrogen Coma

    Did you really want to go there King?
    you force me to step up in this ring.
    you in one corner, I'm in the other,
    we gonn go..the 9 rounds brother!

    First thing you need to do, is check your gene
    cause there's nothing greater...than the love of a Queen
    we can move the world with just one glance
    brother, there's no way..you stand a chance

    Your 3 legs don't mean jack, pound for pound,
    if all you do is spread it around.
    your every woman's dream? ..well dream again,
    it was US, who pushed out all you men.

    You can't climb no higher, then I let you King!
    you still want to wrestle with me in this ring?
    Remember in life, as you play this Testosterone game,
    I gave birth to You...can you do the same?

    And I dare any one who breathes, to put my Estrogen to the test!

    I enjoyed reading this piece poet, it was fun..thanks
     
  4. twision

    twision Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Queentswana!!!!
    Love you so much my sister!!!!!!!!!!!
    Mos def you're one I have always enjoyed.
    I ENJOYED your addendum!!!!

    Please know these aren't my true feelings.
    I was just simply expressing from the viewpoint of the brutes who call themselves men....hence the word "coma"
    I'm sure "the brute" will respond to you though. So don't get skurred!!

    Peace and Love
    twision
     
  5. Khasm13

    Khasm13 STAFF STAFF

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    ha...this was dope poet....word!!!

    one love
    khasm
     
  6. queentswana

    queentswana Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Of course I know they aren't your feelings ...but ...ut..bring it ...lol
    it was much fun, thanks again twision...^5
     
  7. NapturallyYours

    NapturallyYours Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Twision and Queen,

    This was hot! Ya'll think of doin a collabo? Much love to both of you!

    Napturally
     
  8. Da Street So'ja

    Da Street So'ja Banned MEMBER

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    thank you for this

    poet
    it needed to be said

    in twenty years
    there will be no REAL men left

    lol
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    The ones who need to see themselves in this, either won't read it, or will read it but miss the point. Well written scribe, poet.
     
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    twision:
    You dropped this one.

    queen:
    You been just doing it with the flo backs sista.

    Much Luv to you both
     
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