Black Poetry : Testimony of Love

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  1. Blk Kween

    Blk Kween Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I am like a volcano
    Time ticking away...
    and now,
    I have come to my moment of eruption

    In my years of being a mature woman, I have been strong and independent because I have to be and I am suppose to be...but there is a another side to me that you have no idea about. With all that strength comes twice as much sensitivity. With that independence comes the want to no longer have to be in control all the time.

    So much and so many things have been bothering me that there is no beginning and end....

    I have wanted to be completely open with you for a while...and I want to start with what has been most important to me. This is rather difficult for me because it is my first time truly opening up to anyone. I am scared, but I want you to completely understand me....and I must begin here...

    I am so greatful and appreciative of our friendship. I trust you like no other....and I have a love for you like no other. I have denied and lied to myself, and I can no longer do it. I don't know what I would do if our friendship were to ever cease, and for this I am fearful, but....

    as we become older and the years age...my love for you has developed into something that is unexplainable. It has soared beyond the feelings of a simple friend....

    I have become fearful, threatened, and I get a feeling of unimportance in your life. I often feel like I am losing you...and I only get more scared....and I no longer have the answers, I no longer have control...and...I don't know what to do. There is this emotion that I have never felt, and as much as I have tried....I have absolutely NO control.

    Fearful of losing, but more afraid of not knowing you...
    Time has come for me to be true...
    to myself, and most importantly...
    I have to be honest and truthful to you
     
  2. Watcher

    Watcher Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Eyes Full of Tears

    This was beautiful Kween......Tell him how you feel...I'm feeling you here...Its good to see your heartfelt writing again.

    Watcher
     
  3. Destee

    Destee destee.com STAFF

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    Testify Kween!

    tell the story ... :heart:

    nice peace

    Destee
     
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    Bishop Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Tight
     
  5. MsDLite

    MsDLite Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    ...i am glad to see you here and reading your testimony!
    i am sure all of us could say a few words on the subject as well! (AMEN!)

    keep on writing...
     
  6. cela

    cela Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    speak it

    speak it speak it speak it!

    CELA
     
  7. alyce

    alyce Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Wellllllll...

    gon' on and TESTIFY!

    Very meaningful expressions here. Thank you.

    A
     
  8. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    awesome dis was phat !!
     
  9. sevens_love

    sevens_love Active Member MEMBER

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    I like...great job
     
  10. Bluewater

    Bluewater Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    oh yes dear sister
    liking this flow..
    yeah there do comes a time
    when ya just wanna
    loose the control
    very nice script :)

    BLueWater:heart:
     
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