Black Poetry : Tested Friendship

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by BlatinaPoet4u, Sep 5, 2004.

  1. BlatinaPoet4u

    BlatinaPoet4u Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Does it make a difference?
    To touch somebody’s heart
    To say you’ll be there for them
    You have been from the start

    Do they really listen?
    Or do they just nod their head
    Not knowing how you cry for them
    And how your heart has bled

    I never knew the meaning
    Of the average small word friend
    Until my life had changed
    And was almost at an end

    I realised I had so much
    To give it up right there
    I had real people in my life
    These friends who only cared

    So this is what I wirte for them
    I knew what I had to do
    Tell my friends just one more thing
    Thanks for being there and being you





    :jumping:~*Be careful wut u choose to do in lyfe, becuz sum1 maybe followin ur footsteps*~ :jumping:
     
  2. toylin

    toylin Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Awww...... Man, I gotta call my friends now! Thank for posting this, Blatina!
     
  3. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    dis what i'm talking bout it makes no different
    when warmth & love come about see i need a woman
    right now to hug and comfort wow ! dis was tyteeeeeeeeeeee!!!
     
  4. BlatinaPoet4u

    BlatinaPoet4u Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    awwwes thanx Toylin and $$Rich$$!! I feel the love :luvv: :luvv: !
     
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    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    very sweet...i only have one close friend and he is my best friend i feel ya on this!!!
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    A true friend just warms the heart, don't they? When the chips are down and they're still there, that's a friend. Liked the way you captured this feeling.
     
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    angelicsage Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Amen...sister
    we often take our friends
    for granted and underestimate
    how much they truly care
    for us...it's amazing how
    tragedy can sometimes
    bring you closer...
    than you even thought possible...


    Wonderful flow...
    Feeling this deeply
    @@@@@@@@
    Sage
     
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    gempis Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I've always said that your friends are the family you choose for yourself, and my friends are the most important people in my life. I'm feelin that from your flow, and it's such a tight packa verses. Flow on!
     
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    Gentle Reminder

    Thanks for reminding me to never take a friendship for granted. Eespecially a true friendship. I had to call my best friend and just say Hi, I was thinking about you.
    Thanks for the flow!
     
  10. krazelyricks

    krazelyricks Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Awwww...this was so touching. Dang, I felt so sad when I got to the bottom. This was tyte. I loved it.
     
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