Black Haiku : Tender Care

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  1. Eisha

    Eisha Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Touching my heart in
    such a vicarious way
    Reach to me my dear.

    My heart is ready
    My soul is revived once more
    Give me tender care.
     
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    wow! this was very nice and well pose'd
     
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    Tender care said she
    Care to ease her soul softly
    Like a soft caress
     
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    tender care with
    is a caressin feeling
    every heart need it
     
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    Every heart needs that
    tender touch, please carefully
    embrace me with love
     
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    sitting hunched over
    sobbing like weeping willows
    needing tender care
     
  7. Eisha

    Eisha Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    The tears turn into
    the love thats longing for care
    Keeping soul at peace

    Embrace each other
    Welcome the security
    Putting heart at ease
     
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    every weepin tear
    is a rejoy of hope, love
    inside open heart
     
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    Feel your tender care
    flowing smoothly through my veins
    from your fingertips
     
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    Angel from above...
    Sent to love and comfort me
    With tender sweet ways
     
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