Black Poetry : Ten Breaths of Comfort.

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  1. Khai Tau

    Khai Tau Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    If I was only aware of the source of her scare
    My love would clothe her and she wouldnt feel bare
    And yes I do dare to show her I care
    For shes not alone becuase I am there
    But then.....but then again
    I can only be where she'll let me be
    Thru low-lying valleys to high moutain peaks
    U see...consistently me, consistently L-O-V-E
    That blanket of security, Ill provide to thee
    When the **** gets rough and seems too much
    and its at the point where enuff is enuff
    and you wanna yell out "I dont give a ****!"
    .............then
    then, breathe. Hook your lungs up to me
    You've been waiting to inhale....so inhale
    You've been waiting to exhale....so exhale
    and do that over and over again...all the way to ten
     
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    queentswana Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Hi Verbatim,
    Welcome to our home, which is now your's too!
    I know there are times in all lives when we need to
    just "ex-hale"
    I like this piece, I can truely relate :welldone:
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Loving her in each and every breath she takes, now that's some kind of loving. Very endearing and well felt vibe.
     
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    welcome to destee.com poetic playground
    welcome to da house of peace & respect
    welcome from above as i bless this some love

    tyte drop ya pen smokin look forward to read more of you as
    love is given , shown do share love in return peace & blessing
    welcome again to da humble house Verbatim.
     
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    welcome to destee.com poetic playground
    welcome to da house of peace & respect
    welcome from above as i bless this some love

    tyte drop ya pen smokin look forward to read more of you as
    love is given , shown do share love in return peace & blessing
    welcome again to da humble house Verbatim
     
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