Black Poetry : tempting proposal

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Derrick Jay, Apr 13, 2002.

  1. Derrick Jay

    Derrick Jay Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    what the hell, its only sex right?
    so make the call
    problem is...
    do i really want to deal with
    the post orgasm reality?
    man its hard! - literally
    got to think straight
    past glistening thighs that await
    is it really worth it?
    to seem interested
    but be somewhere else in spirit
    perplextions cast reflections in my mental mirror
    creating distorted imagery
    ooo shes fine though
    hmm...is that enough?
    to tough out uncomfortable silence
    when you really have nothing to say
    in ways wishing it had never happened
    one half-second after ahhhh...
    its a tempting proposal
    mmph...short shorts and legs to match
    want to rev up that engine and give it gas
    bucking wildly in the fast lane
    ****
    i should refrain
    this is too much strain on the mental
    aww she wearing the dental floss draws!
    whew...as much as i could
    should
    would
    i'll have to say naw
    maybe in another time i could play
    learning life lessons has taught me to stay away
    from easy prey
    especially when
    i'd rather spend most of the day
    outside of her company
    so i'll just turn right around
    and put the **** phone down...
     
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    GA_Sunshyne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    DJ.


    aight!! so... somebody IS feelin' me tonight!! :)

    i felt like sayin' "a-men!!" to this heah joynt...
    i mean, i felt like... well... you git dha pic.

    (thank You! :wink: )

    :heart:
    Elayne
     
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    Bert Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    BRAVO!! Something all need to re-think... and come to that same conclusion. Well done.

    Thank you

    Bert
     
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    DJ,

    On point no doubt!!!!!

    :peace:
    GQ
     
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    brotherman Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Don't let it be me on a lonely night after a hard day from getting out of the wrong side of bed the night before I wasn't balanced before retiring that day! Ha ha. Thanks for showing these gals what we are challenged with everyday from all of their loveliness. Smart man to win over his penis in this ongoing saga, indeed, dog, indeed.
     
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    Nia Maishani Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    A+ again...

    I wouldn't believe it, had I not read it with mine own eyes. I'm beginning to believe that the revolution is beginning to come full circle, Peoples.

    Wisdom dropping like anchors. Umph, umph, umph.

    :toast:
     
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    I second these emotions...

    Wisdom.

    Thank you

    alyce
     
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    Derrick Jay Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    yes...sometimes its best to know when to say when

    One,
    Derrick Jay
     
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