Black Poetry : Temporary Insanity (Reply to T's haiku!)

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by klabarron, Jan 18, 2002.

  1. klabarron

    klabarron Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    was it not the confusion that sent s/he away?
    was it not the misunderstanding of befuddled minds?
    was it not the lack of communication that drove s/he away from home?

    shall s/he return? can s/he come home?
    home? house of two confused minds?
    or home of two understanding heart?
    home? or house? confused? discombobulate? discomfited?
    bewildered? beguiled? befuddled?
    can "the leaver" or "the left behind" find peace and tranquillity of mind with self?

    these question(s) remain to be answered.
     
  2. T

    T Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thank you Brotha Klabarron

    thank you for putting some meat on the bones.

    thinking on it! all of it, and more.

    T
     
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    klabarron Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    much love to you my sista! thanks.
     
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    UbZoRbShUn Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    hmmmm

    now I gotta go read T's and come back to this one



    BRB
     
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