Black Poetry : temporarily forever

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by hi-wa, Feb 27, 2002.

  1. hi-wa

    hi-wa Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    i pack my bags
    throwing in everything i own to disown
    my home for advancement
    a mirage of enhancement masks my visage
    no matter where i travel
    this country unravels its sticky fingaz
    hiding within its crevices screams of life
    people dying
    rewinding the future to days
    of black and white
    dot.coms from humble beginnings
    cd roms from eight tracks from brown
    and black recording tape
    anywhere on red/brown or black soil
    my battle's suspect
    no need to try and eat next week
    in default of a loan in the form of a paycheck
    so most wreck their brains
    for a beacon of hope on how to cope
    with the next legal injection
    of caffeinated dope
    unless you can stem a brainchild of life support
    a gadget of race repression
    that's small enough to fit in my pocket
    so i can leave behind in
    country towns with only two flashing red lights
    or rural rest stops where colors clash
    and lynchings are still, but silent
    in the whispers of night

    then, i sit down and unpack my bags
    cause my living conditions are temporarily
    forever
     
  2. mizdee2002

    mizdee2002 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    hmmmmmmmmmmmm. deep, thought inducing, moving.

    keep doing yo thang,

    dee
     
  3. hi-wa

    hi-wa Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanx dee. pree-shate the read and response.
    glad i could spark thoughts from such a mastermind
    as yuorself.

    hw
     
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    GA_Sunshyne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Ga_Boi.


    if i tell you that... i think you're supa-extra
    (yesss that is a word) :D talented...
    would you believe me? well... you betta!

    keepdoinyathangman... :)

    :heart:
    ya Gurl.
     
  5. hi-wa

    hi-wa Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thank you georgiagurl.
    your skills far outnumber mine tho'. i'm
    just tryna make a dolla outta fiftenn cents.
    that's a dime and a nickel if u
    din no. thanx for the compliments.

    luvulikasista and maybe mo'

    holla
     
  6. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    wow! da wonder of ya flow has a perfectional spin
    keep writting da lines u scribe
     
  7. hi-wa

    hi-wa Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    preshate the read RICH.
    always

    hw
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    da love of heart is an honor too read ya lovely work of art
     
  9. Da Street So'ja

    Da Street So'ja Banned MEMBER

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    yo feeling this dun
    HI-WA

    you brought it here dun
     
  10. hi-wa

    hi-wa Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanx for it SO'JA.
    always a pleasure to
    read a reply from such a talent.
    maintain.

    hw
     
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