Black Poetry : TEMPLE of da future

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  1. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    From da temple of my love
    my heart beats da congo
    maze through da core door
    i search da walls inside da
    chamber under this slumber
    for da reasons is notions
    and from da visional trap
    my soul cascading da day
    looking from this view i see
    not my moment but tomorrow
    from da sleepless nights
    where loves calling but yet
    not i'm heard correctly yet
    not am i felt like da summer
    breeze blowing swiftly and
    never do the kiss hold da
    radiant blush of october rain
    pushing deep inside only to
    be standing outside a harvest
    I know deep in da depth of my
    mental mind lay the answers
    so now i'm :thinking: harder
    even more then before and to
    my eyez suprise the motion
    sit still for me to pen down
    what i feel is da future of what
    is to be and where this temple
    stand on the justicely word
    for the fight is only a few
    hundered of thousands years
    away and my battle has end
    inside the future i pen truth
    to be continue ! :deal:
     
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    this was pure beauty...i went on a deep poetic ride fo sho
    love ya mental twisted mind...
    whats held in the future will come in time
    your heard and felt...open ya eyes...
    lovely flow it touch me

    Peace
    Angel
     
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    Sometimes what lies in the future is too much to fathom at once, so the thoughts have to linger on it a while....and the deeper you are, the more intricate what you hold inside shall be....Keep flowing.
     
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    thankz angel the heavy mental now looking out
    to pen what lay ahead stay tune for pt.2


    tru dat watz but the heavyness allowed me to see deeper and better
    so da war of tymes faced now then later stay tune for pt.2
     
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    :great: looking forward to pt 2...
    you welcome lovely posed scribe......
     
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    tru dat thankz..............
     
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    from da temple of thy future stand a thin line between here and now
    pt.II next !
     
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