Black Poetry : telling y'all all about her*

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  1. thepoetsean

    thepoetsean Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    hey fam...
    this girl I love--
    she's beautiful--
    special in every letter of the word*

    Spectacular smile with a
    Peachy personality perplexing
    Every muscle that moves me...
    Can't cope with being away from her though
    I
    Am falling, stumbling, wandering, writing aimlessly--
    Lingering in her all*

    hope she loves me though.
    i call out to her fam--
    when i'm dreamin'
    cuz i imagine her love is--
    pure like
    untapped undiscovered
    unfound*
    elation--

    causing me to smile eternally...
    causing me to wonder--
    wow...
    how she do that?

    leave sean in awe...
    just
    being
    her.

    lovely
    special
    endearing
    in all her own way.

    and she don't even know it.

    (lemarac)

    sean.
    :nuts:
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    ahhhhhhh!!

    reminds me of my sweet thang
    she be ummmmm! good
    man i feel ya big tymes fo real!!
    i know.....................:D :toast: :D
     
  3. thepoetsean

    thepoetsean Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    RICH

    thanks for the read RICH.

    sean.
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    alyce Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    loving this

    and savoring the flava

    Thanks for sharing her*....and hoping she takes her cues from the clues.... :)


    a
     
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    blakverb Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Way to represent for the seans brother!!! You gets four thumbs up for this piece here....Caramel, huh. nice.

    blak
     
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    Sing it.....

    through the to the rooftops and trees, when your're in love..the world should know........very nice poem.

    Epiphany :heart:
     
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    Kitana Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    "and she doesn't even know it"..
    well let her read these beautiful words and she soon will...
    how could she resist?

    K
     
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    thepoetsean Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Miss A, Epiphany, Kitana, and Sean the 1st...

    how could i ever thank you all!!!

    so pleased that you all felt this heah...
    thanx for the read peeps...


    *allchokedup*

    sean
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    U R most welcome

    coz u r so deeply felt
     
  10. honeebrownsuga

    honeebrownsuga Active Member MEMBER

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    Thank u 4 sharing. Please inform us when she's yours. If u share w/her what u have w/us, there is no doubt she will be. :heart:
     
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