Black Poetry : Telling It

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  1. MADDRAPPER

    MADDRAPPER Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Telling It

    Flowing lame like slowing rain criticism make me less in force
    It stress my course guess dictionary grammar is best source
    See corrupt and funny when they deduct my money as tax now hoarse
    Can’t speak faint on streets hustle is a thug’s treasure but blood
    Pressure is high it’s a weak fault to eat salt with food it mud
    Up your veins, pug up your brains can’t breathe well or love
    Use to crave corrupt and fiery but gave up entirely abandon
    Hope now standing choked and confused and handing
    In my resignation with no destination in game hurt to remain
    Cats sleeping worse not peeping my verse just work in vain
    Up all night on a small write verses all fright with stress and pain
    Cats test my brain a mess to explain to get no replies is lame
    Can’t reach the finish line **** diminish my mind it came
    Clear after two laps and true raps that I would never reach fame
    Try have a blend ill and strong but the wind still blow wrong no aim
    Need you all attention in this wall of dimension tough to climb
    Need ruff rhymes and wet script to get a grip and climb divine
    Grab spoon sprinkle the skies with a twinkle in my eyes
    Still can’t write a holy verse or soulfully disperse stuff that flies
    Like angels, need an acclamation from crowd s and congratulations
    Very proud on microphones hear accusations loud with devastations
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    another tyte drop MADD !!!
     
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    Do you ever read your poetry aloud in voice chat during the poetry slam here at Destee Madd? That would be something to hear.
     
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    thanks for the props for real yall
     
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    keep telling it clearly and correctly
    most welcome brutha MADD
     
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