Black Poetry : Tell The Angels

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  1. Kitana

    Kitana Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Missing you is easy, I do it every day
    I've done it every night since you went away
    No matter what I say, no matter what I do
    I'm always surrounded with memories of you
    Memories that find me wherever I go
    Wrapping me in thoughts that hurt me so
    Tearing my heart out and making me cry
    Making me question why you had to die

    All you left me is memories, tears and pain
    No sunshine, no laughter, just dark skies and rain
    No happiness lives within me you see
    Why? - because you're not here with me
    Come back to me now, make everything right
    Walk into my dreams as I sleep tonight
    I can't live without you - so tell the angels above
    That for me to survive, I need your love
    Tell them they're wrong, they've made a mistake
    Come back to me now - before it's too late

    (c) nfn 2000
     
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    blakverb Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Sad piece queen.

    well done.

    blak
     
  3. j'hiah

    j'hiah Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    oh no.

    k,
    this is 2 emotional for words.
    whoever the loved one is, live life for them. that's what they want to see. it would make them happy..

    *shedding tears with you*

    -Christ is way, truth, and life-

    jh.
     
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    K

    I am speechless.

    thank you for sharing.


    a
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    beautifully written

    sadly spoken
    feelings of love never forgotten
    i feel u as i miss one so dear to me........
     
  6. Kitana

    Kitana Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Cindy..thanks for reading and sharing, strong love is a gift isn't it..

    Blak..thanks..this one was personal..and at the time I needed to express myself..

    j'hiah..your words are so kind...and I am living for her..this was the way, along with a much deeper letter, that I expressed my grief for my mother..sometimes we can't cry until much later...

    a..I know..you can feel but can't say...thank you

    Rich..you know where I'm coming from...thanks for your words...
     
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