Quiet Poetry Lounge : Tell Me

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Heartbeat, Apr 1, 2001.

  1. Heartbeat

    Heartbeat Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Tell me all your secrets
    Tell me what you feel inside
    Tell me something no one else knows
    Tell me the things that make you cry

    Tell me what you dream about
    In the hours just before dawn
    Tell me of fantasies that stay on your mind
    Tell me the name of your favorite love song

    Tell me how you want to be loved
    Tell me what puts a smile on your face
    Tell me what happens when you’re exploding inside
    Tell me what goes on in that special place

    Tell me you need my loving touch
    Which makes you feel like pouring rain
    Tell me we will be as one
    Tell me my love is not in vain

    BE
     
  2. T

    T Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    i heard

    she loves you only
    i heard she cannot sleep
    without you she lives lonely
    a hard secret to keep

    i heard she feels your touch
    in the hours before dawn
    the intensity is such
    she thinks she can't go on...

    i heard her favorite song
    is every song you sing
    to her your love belongs
    you are her everything

    i heard you make her whole
    with you she cums like rain
    i heard you own her soul
    and your love's not in vain...


    T
     
  3. alyce

    alyce Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    ya'll

    this is too real!

    A
     
  4. Destee

    Destee destee.com STAFF

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    yes yes yes ...

    tell'n it all !

    :heart:

    Destee
     
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    belahni Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    again

    another example of 'fine poetry'. Not just a list of questions ~ but a beautiful love note for special eyes to see. I am thankful that you share your notes with us.

    B
     
  6. shaneak

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    So this

    is what you hear...
    But he does not whisper these things in my ear..
    He does not tell me that he loves me...
    He does not tell me he will always be there..

    So you heard these things...
    Tell me does my love know...
    Tell me that he'll be there...
    Promise me he won't go...

    I know you heard my music...
    Did he say he like it...
    Tell me all his fears...
    Or does he even care...

    And you say my love is not in vain...
    Yet my heart feels pain...
    Tell me you what you heard is true...
    For by his actions....
    I do not believe you...
     
  7. N2urSoul

    N2urSoul Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    HeartBeat

    Two Words: OH MY!

    One :heart:
     
  8. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    whoaaaaaaaaaa! bruh
    this was all dat and some tyte drop
    what a classic here
     
  9. Auroraflower

    Auroraflower Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    This is beautifull ...



    i like this piece ..



    its nice to feel if someone wants to know you
    its feels good to know if someones interest is going out to you
    the person..in order to get to know you better..




    LoveAuroraflower:heart:
     
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