Black Poetry : tell me

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by thespokesman, Feb 3, 2004.

  1. thespokesman

    thespokesman Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Come here, just come here
    I just wanna talk to you baby

    Tell me
    Would you like if I gave a kiss
    Would you like it if I touched you like this
    Would you like it if grabbed your hips
    Would you like it if I blew into your lips

    You like that

    Tell me
    Would you like if I licked you down
    Would you liked if I added a little sound
    Would you liked if I moved down
    Would you like me to move aound

    You like that

    Tell me
    Would you like me to whisper in your ear
    Would you like me nibble, take away your fear
    Would you like to be held, your feet on my back
    Would you like if I did it like that

    You like that

    Tell me
    Would you like me to go all the way
    Would like me to tease you and play
    Would you like it if I switched gears
    Would you like a prisoner restrained for years

    Tell me…..

    roomtime vol. 1
    da lost flo
     
  2. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    this sweet
    nice write
     
  3. true love

    true love Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    i was hanging on every word. i loved this soo much. much love to you.
     
  4. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Nice sensual scribe, keep flowin.
     
  5. triniti424

    triniti424 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    in a simple word...
    Yes
    :D
     
  6. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    awesome tyte lovely flow
    let ya pen stroll
     
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    asimplepoet Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I tell you what this rifht here was so sweet that I just had to pull it out the crates. A job :welldone:
     
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