Black Poetry : tell me.....

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by MzBlkAngel, Sep 15, 2003.

  1. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    taken my time
    to release this to
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    c
    tion……
    this is not a love song…
    just one of those same
    old love poems….

    I been sittin here
    loozen my mind…
    Are you wastin my time
    Or are you just being kind…

    Tell me what is going on with you
    Don’t give me one of your lines…
    Please
    Please…..
    Don’t throw are love away….
    Be true to me
    Be true to you……
    SEE….
    I am down…..

    See this aint no love song…
    Just one of them old
    love poems..

    pourin out my soul…
    now tell me what
    it is all about…
    coz I am down…
    mean what you say…
    don’t throw me a line….

    average girl…
    Cant duplicate…
    Never compare….

    I been sittin here
    loozen my mind…
    Are you wastin my time
    Or are you just being kind…

    This is my love poem…
    Awwwwww
    from
    me
    to
    you…
    Sittin here loozen my mind….
    My love isn’t blind…
    Coz I am down…..

    Tick tock tick tock…
    Time gonnin by so slow…
    Are you wastin my time…
    Or are you just being kind…
    Coz I am loozen my mind


    a blkangel thang.....
    :kiss:
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    yes indeed this was
    not da song but the
    art of a heart in poem
    the realm of one
    will speak to u
    surely he hear u now
    wow!

    write da poem on down !
     
  3. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thank you guys for readin...

    Rich...i hope he did....but hope he understand....
     
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    those questions are so familiar...and i do believe that i heard music when i was reading this...i loved this, thanks for sharing.
     
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    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    lol...
    thanks true love....
    i think i did as well...lol
     
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