Black Poetry : Tell Me Why Yall

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  1. poeticlyspeakin

    poeticlyspeakin Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    She wants me, but then again she doesnt
    i met her, fell in love, still in love, i wish i wasnt
    why... tell me how yall... how can she just make me feel so **** good and bad at the same time
    she's got the right words with wrong intentions, wrong thoughts with the right mind
    I cant let go... ive tried, i am trying, but she's got my emotions in knots
    She was, she is, always will be, the only thing i got
    No, no, no, no she's not...

    I cant make up my mind, i can give advice, but never take it
    Im walkin, but not movin, im not gonna make it
    Tell me why yall... tell me how... she does this?
    ive never been the one to commit, so why does my heart so into it
    i hear her laugh, i say her words, i see her smile, i miss her...
    No I dont.... i cant... im lookin for new fish in the sea like a fisher

    I can't do it, id rather be alone, no i want someone, no never mind i dont
    i want to just escape, but i cant and i wont
    Tell me why yall... tell me how... she comes in always at the right time?
    Tell me why love and lust live in the same spotlight?

    Tell me why things were so perfect, then they just turned bad?
    Tell me why she was and is the only perfect thing i had?
    Tell me why yall....
     
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    sarcasm4eva Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    omfg.........this is truly hot....u had me since the 1st stanza.......sorta explains the situation im goin through. keep expressin ya self n keep ur head up...........much love "tell me why yall".......no, u tell me.lol
     
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    LMAO. thank u, i was just expressin whats in my mind and heart. didnt even write it down 1st, i just typed it in 5 minutes.
     
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    lol, dayum........i see someone got skillz....lol.much love :)
     
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    Awww...that's sad and sweet at the same time!
     
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    thank u. i wanna write sumthin so bad right now, but i have writers block, its irritatin.
     
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    i cant understand

    I can't understand
    It hurts to read your words
    why?
    because Im in Her shoes
    I loved him so much
    but it seemed he was afraid of me; there was something holding my baby back from me, although i knew he truthfully loved me
    so he left me
    without goodbye and feeling confused
    that just left ME alone ashamed feeling used
    and although he's no longer with me i feel him mentally and emotionally , missing me........
    if you really love her and she feels the same be with her
    not out of sympathy for her emotions but because YOU KNOW it's meant to be
    or else she'll feel like i did without the one she loved and needed desperately
     
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    poeticlyspeakin Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    HERE MY FLOW BABYGIRL...
    SHE SAYS SHE NEEDS ME, BUT TURNS ME OFF AND ON
    SHE WANTS ME IN HER LIFE, BUT NEVER STAYS IN MINE

    THERES ONLY SO MUCH U CAN TAKE, THEN UR GONE
    AND THEN ONCE U LEAVE SHE FINDS...
    THE RIGHT MOMENT, THE RIGHT WORDS
    TO GET ME BACK, TO HURT
    I KNOW SHES GOIN THRU A LOT, BUT SO AM I
    IMWITH HER CUZ I LOVE HER N SHE BLOWS MY MIND

    LOVIN HER IS HARD WHILE LOVIN ME IS ROUGH TO HER
    SEE BABYDOLL... ITS NEVER BEEN UP TO ME...
    ITS ALWAYS BEEN UP TO HER
     
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    all i goota say is tyte and so so right
     
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    thank you SwT
     
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