Black Poetry : Tell Him

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Natasha, May 21, 2001.

  1. Natasha

    Natasha Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Tell him for me
    Cause I can’t seem to tell him myself
    Tell him
    How much I love him
    How uch I need him
    How I so very much want him in my world
    Tell him
    That I am sorry
    That I never knew
    Just how fragile his heart could be
    Tell him
    I know he’s not weak
    Tell him for me
    That I now realize
    His true strength
    The magnitude of his love for me
    for us
    tell him
    that I cry at night
    without him to hold me close
    I tried to tell him once
    But he hung up when he heard my voice
    I hurt him so very badly
    But
    Tell him for me
    I'm sorry
    tell him
    I love You

    Natasha
     
  2. Destee

    Destee destee.com STAFF

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    Gurrrrl ... give me his number!
    hang'n up on my Sistah & shat

    i'll tell him alrite ... :uzi:

    hehehehe

    not trying to make lite of this peace
    very nice ... felt it all ... thanks

    :heart:

    Destee
     
  3. Afridancr

    Afridancr Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Been there gyrl...

    this here is intense and deeply felt. I'm feelin this so that...I'm getting knots in my stomach from the feeling I got when I was in your shoes yearning...hurting and wanting him to know how sorry I was for thinking he was made of steel.

    Although we aren't together now (5 years apart-1 year clean ) I've learned that men feel and hurt and cry just like us. they desire to be loved and respected and treated as such.

    Whew....:eek: gyrl...I've been touched!

    Thank you:wink:
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    whoaaaaaaaaaa!!!
    look out now !
     
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    The emotional words that we need to say sometimes, yet can't. Deeply expressed.
     
  6. nevar

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    its amazing no matter what our location we women still feel the same. flow on poet. in other wordz your wordz hit too close to home.:hearts4:
     
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    Hi Natasha
    this is very deep
    we never know just how hurt
    someone can become until it happens
    Can't help but feel this

    Peace
     
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    This is real
    Deep and humble as your heart
    Love this piece poet
     
  9. PLATINUMILLITY1

    PLATINUMILLITY1 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    GURL TELL IT TELL IT SNAPZ OF THA CHAIN!!!!!!!!!
     
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