Quiet Poetry Lounge : tell him? tell him not?

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  1. sahara heart

    sahara heart Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    What if i told you I wanted to spend my life with you?
    What if for one moment, you looked into my eyes
    And saw the love that wells up inside them at your smile?

    But you refuse to look at me
    and I am afraid to tell you that you are the one.
    Would it make a difference if you knew?

    Well, I say that I love you and you are my one
    But fate has strayed us away from each other
    On different paths we walk away from what we know is true.
    Not really understanding why,
    I am fighting the strongest emotion I have ever felt.

    Maybe its all over reacting
    Maybe its just another feeling.

    But for the first time, I am the one who wants this to happen.
    To work against all odds to make it right.
    Then, if all failed, I would let go of you easier.
    But for me to simply accept something I dont understand,
    that, i may never come to terms with.
     
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    angelicsage Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Love is a gamble
    and you have to
    take chances...

    Very nice peace!
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I'm really feeling your work sister. And like sage said, if we don't give it a try and a chance, we will never know for sure. So true, and genuinely brought.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    what if i told u how i care
    and when u near how my
    heart gleam what if just
    this once u can see my
    wonderment in a vision
    and how it lone to speak

    this was deep and love can make u feel in many ways
    take chances and sometime even move on ! nice write
     
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    I understand totally. This speaks volumes about love and its chances.
     
  6. sahara heart

    sahara heart Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I feel the love glowing from your heart,
    And though far away, I feel your gaze upon my eyes
    I see in you, a love so kind, whole hearted
    And in my eyes, u see the reflection of a love divine

    Thanks $$RICH$$ . One luv
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    within out vision
    a love so true
    i see & feel da depth of u
    i feel da heart as it cascade
    cutting deep like a sharp blade
    i held ya soul close as it speaks
    feeling da soft & meek whispers
    most welcome my dear !
     
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    THA HOOKUPMAN Banned MEMBER

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    tell them.....On different paths we walk away from what we know is true.
    Not really understanding why,
    I am fighting the strongest emotion I have ever felt.
    that is a so true statement :deal:
     
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    queentswana Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    If you "love or feel something" ...do by all means, tell him...and let it go, ...if it comes back...it was meant to be, if it doesn't...it wasn't.
    this is a beautiful poem, thanks for spreading it.
     
  10. sahara heart

    sahara heart Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thank u all for showing so much love. Peace and Blessings!
     
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