Quiet Poetry Lounge : Tell cupid

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  1. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    sit on a star
    Watchin…..
    Wondering if you know
    Whats there…..
    An angel touch you….
    But you made her cry..
    as you hurt not knowin she
    stay in a hush…….
    Watchin…..
    Watchin….
    Silly is the game….
    Fool is the love
    But all in all
    She knows as she
    Sit on a star…..
    Singing
    Love oh love
    Just leave me alone…..
    If you don’t mean me no good
    Tell cupid to mind his own
    Business and leave me alone….
    Love oh love….
    Don’t live here
    No more
    No more…
    She sings upon a star….
    I played the fool
    Once to many…….
    Oh love love…
    Please go away….
    The pain inside is
    burning so deep…
    Watchin as it walks away
    Once more….
    She sits upon a star….
    Watchin…..
    Just
    ………Watching
    as it goes…..

    pieces of untitle life
    a blackangel thang.....
    copyright 2004
     
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    as our sister coco would say, I'm feelin this soul deep, girl
     
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    Oh lord, Cupid must need a vacation, he's lost his aim again. True love finds it's way in time so they say. Nicely done.
     
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    Monetary going above and beyond PREMIUM MEMBER

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    Give cupid time....the arrow is on it's way....let it hit its target first...Ok?

    Keep the faith.

    :thanks: for sharing.

    :toast:
     
  5. MzBlkAngel

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    the love in her heart
    is gone shall never return....
    for the love that walk out
    did not give a ummmm
    as she floats on her star...
    she sings she sings....
    oh love oh love....
    Just leave me alone…..
    If you don’t mean me no good
    Tell cupid to mind his own
    Business and leave me alone….
    she sings...............................
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    nice scribe tell cupid !!
    dis was delightful
     
  7. kente417mojo

    kente417mojo Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Very cool. I love the way that this poems flows. Very easy to read and to feel.
     
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