Black Poetry : Tele-Gumbo

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  1. Afridancr

    Afridancr Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Anxiously waiting...Anticipating the
    sound of his...Deep...Sensual
    ...Sexual
    ...Mentally Stimulating
    Voice I
    Turn off the lights, burn incense and candles that...saturate the air with
    the scent of
    ...Frankincense and Myhrr

    Body relaxed by a HOT...STEAMY bubble bath
    Milk chocolate skin Glistening from...
    natural body oils...Ooooooooh, the sight of me will make his Bloood boil!

    Maxwell in the background...

    "Submerge within the light,
    ooooooh you make my night
    Let your atmosphere surround me..."

    "Ring...ring..."

    "Hello, Aminata?" It's me baby. You've summoned me with your vibe. Are you ready for me?"

    Sipping on pina coladas I...get Caught up as
    Your mental penis penetrates my
    vaginal vortex

    Secretions of sexual pleasures...Drip from...
    My lips~~your lips...YOU
    Take sips
    tongue penetrating tongue while...those
    lips...tongue
    ...Lickin'
    ....Slippin'
    .....Dippin'...hips rotatin
    In my mind I want him, In my body I feel him, In my soul I yearn for his love...**** I'm on fire!!!

    I'm imaginin' with intense concentration on
    "****, I wish...I wish he
    was...really...here"
    Exploring, exploiting the depths of my mind, my soul and every inch of my body.

    Guess my only outlet will be...Modern Technology
    Hope Verizon ain't tappin my phone
    the way this man is muse'n
    tappin', slippin'...slappin'
    thrustin'...bustin',
    in...and...out, back...and...front
    up...and.down
    winin'...round and round
    breathin Heavily, kissin' and caressin'
    lovin' the natural beauty of...Me

    "Oh...oh, uuuuuhhhhhhh...oooohhhhh-WAIT, my line just clicked!"

    "Aminata?"
    "Yes?"
    "Don't answer that ****. Don't you know I ain't done with you yet?!"

    Dayum, now I'm ready to be Freaked Mentally
    Drained Physically
    through the waves of Verizon...sun's gone down
    panties...down
    bra...unsnapped
    unveiling the True Me...He
    Gazes unbelievably asking,

    "Beautiful black woman, are you ready to be mused?"

    In a~Muse~ment I reply,

    "Muse me til' the forces Fuse We and...take us to the height of sexual pleasure and... satisfy us to...the depths of our mused souls"

    As he...
    vocalizes his lips kissing mine, in my mind
    My Mind I...imagine he's there...His presence soaking my sphere
    Moved his way up to...
    the Lobe
    of
    My
    Ear
    Sweet nectar between my vaginal lips excites him as...I...My...Lips...Suck...Him...In
    Contract
    Release
    Contract...and we're
    moaning from within' He's
    massagin', thrustin, pounding, lusting
    Got me GaSpiNg, GrAspIng for air I'm...
    ReAchinG for sOmeonE BUT...No one's there He
    flips me, twists me, turns me all about...

    "Aminata"
    "Yeeeeeeeeeees?"
    "Aminata"
    "Yeeeeeeeeeees?"
    Your love stimulates, makes me wanna shout as...
    our love runs out like...
    Water from a spout
    Gasping for air...as...we bring each other
    to Complete ExStacy,
    we're interrupted by...a sweet little lady
    3 hours later...

    "You have one minute remaining!"

    "Oh, Aminata, I think our time has run out"

    "Yes, but...let this taste of my lips, tongue and mouth
    hold you over til out next bout'"

    TELE-GUMBO

    ©2000EssenceofAminata all rights reserved
     
  2. N2urSoul

    N2urSoul Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Afri~

    This is a nice piece of work sustah -- well written...

    But I'm laughin' because we must have been
    telepathically speakin' to one another
    because last night -- I wrote a response to
    GYPSYMAN's piece "Center of A Soul", and in my
    response I described
    the fragrances of Frankincense & Myrrh .... and now I'm readin' you and see it here too... dayyyuummm gurl :lol:

    How coincidental?! :lol:

    One :heart:
     
  3. Da Street So'ja

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    afri - you have done it again

    you know you've just read a great piece

    when two minutes after you've read it your mouth is STILL hanging open

    great stuff

    my sista
     
  4. shaneak

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    As my old Teacher would say...Get you mind out of the Gutter:laugh:

    Sike!!! Girl do yo thang....work it out.. exercise the legs...why he exercise is pcmuscle... LOL if you know what i mean.

    this joint was off the hook. Well scribe...beautifully written...and nice detailed...rewind...I'm readin this again.
     
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