Quiet Poetry Lounge : TEASE.....BREATHE

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by CreativeExpress, Mar 2, 2004.

  1. CreativeExpress

    CreativeExpress Active Member MEMBER

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    OOH...
    what's this I feel,
    the soft breezy pulse
    of my name escaping your lips
    AAH...
    Now I know what this is
    the power to make me succumb
    to your sensitivity
    MMMM...
    What's this warmth I sense
    the smooth-roughness of your tongue
    and the dance it does where I shiver
    YES...
    You're taking me there
    I'm nearly there
    the tension in my body
    burns fires on my skin
    The arch in my back
    allows your name to escape smoothly
    from my lips
    OH YES,YES...
    I'm quaking
    OOH YES,YES..
    I'm shaking
    This feeling you bring
    makes...
    me...
    so, so, so...
    OH MY....OOH MY
    I know you should be right there
    I need to feel you right there
    I grope, I thrash, and try to put you
    right...there
    OOH...OH
    But you refuse
    and expertly strum a tune
    On the spots that make me sweat
    never staying there too long
    Just long enough
    To...
    make...
    me...OOH,OH,OH...
    But not just yet
    You're not through yet
    Now I feel
    the smooth-roughness
    glide gracefully
    along the sweet, hard, pink
    precious diamond
    that is the nucleus
    of my existence
    Darting back and forth
    I tear into the the flesh
    on my lips
    begging to be released
    And then you delve in
    so deep
    OOH...
    so sweet..
    OOH...OH, YES...OH
    I'm there, I see
    I'm close...
    I'm far...
    I'm...
    being...
    set...
    FREE.....
    OOH.....OH
    My bliss is written
    all over my body
    your mission is accomplished
    and you know you've got me....
     
  2. Aprofoundman

    Aprofoundman Active Member MEMBER

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    Your deep

    I like your poem sexy.
    It's deep.
    It flows like a waterfall.
     
  3. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    very well scribe flow here
    welcome and happy to feel
    ya vibe ....deep
     
  4. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Very spicy scribe here indeed. Welcome to Destee, and keep writing.
     
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    angelicsage Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    :jawdrop: :jawdrop: :jawdrop: :jawdrop: :jawdrop: :jawdrop:

    Please read my lips..."I love what you've done here"...
    Not only do I think you should post this in the other
    poetry forum...I would love to hear it live on the open mic...
    It has so much movement and pulls you in...then makes you wait
    back and forth...love the motion you created with the
    sculpting of your words...

    Officially Wowed...you should consider the "Poetry Throwdown"...

    Friday Night Poetry ThrowDown! in Voice Chat - www.destee.com/chat
    Every Friday Night @ 8 pm ET
     
  6. CreativeExpress

    CreativeExpress Active Member MEMBER

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    THANKS FOR THE LOVE i WILL CONSIDER THE THROWDOWN, DO YOU NEED A MIC ON YOUR PC FOR THAT?
     
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