Black Poetry : tears

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  1. the_story

    the_story Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    i staggered under his existence
    he was such a burden.....
    he crushed my heart behind
    paper thin walls
    and i was
    dying
    dying
    dying
    to everyone else
    we were
    "perfect for each other"
    but to smile a lie hurted
    as he hurt me
    again
    again
    again
    the confines of my brain
    bled black and blu
    from the abuse
    i went through
    tired...
    so tired....
    please don't hurt me any more...


    his touch scorches
    my soul,
    and makes me scream......
    in agony

    and tears fall against
    my i-lids and life
    meant....nothing
     
  2. LibertyLady

    LibertyLady Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    StorYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYY come here sissy let me give you a B I G warm huge....!

    I,ve been there.....
    i just feld the pain just by reading this...
    so in that way this was good...
    unfortunatly

    but sad....

    Strength to you sis
    bless..
    LOve L
     
  3. LibertyLady

    LibertyLady Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    The Poem may be Continued........


    but the pain has to stop........

    Love L
     
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    that abuse thing :nono:
    time to bounce or just be a friend...

    peace..
     
  5. the_story

    the_story Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanks liberty (return hug):) and u are right the pain has to stop
     
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    the_story Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thats right like my typin teacher says "It ain't happenin honey!"
    :nono:
     
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