Quiet Poetry Lounge : Tears within

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by MzBlkAngel, Apr 30, 2004.

  1. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Really sad inside….
    Tears flow within
    Cant bare the pain
    I am not happy
    Blues of blues
    As the dark begins to seep in
    all I can do is weep
    my sleep is little
    my worries haunt my mental
    as…..
    Life deals bad hands
    Like a back up drain
    But I move on…
    Pretending to be strong….
    And it don’t hurt deep down
    But it do
    Across my heart
    You can feel the pain..
    Boils on high….
    Lost and confused
    Mind twisted….
    Feelin the rapture of it all…
    But at night I still say
    my prayers hoping for
    A better tomorrow
    and a brighter future
    because within my
    My Father God
    All things are possible…
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    yes indeed it is
    flow on very nice write
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    So true, in God there lies anything and everything, keep flowing.
     
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    very eloquently expressed, sis. stay strong and keep the faith - bad times don't last, and you are a strong woman.
     
  5. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thank you all for the love on dis piece
    within i know God is good
    and only lay what you can handle...
    but the sadness still lays
    thanks again for the love
    Angel
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    with faith what seem sadness will become
    cheers and lighten da hearts load and take
    all the troubles of the mind away
    intime sistah in time
     
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    SensualReality Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I love this piece,feelin' the emotion
    deep drop:wink:
    "In the morning you'll be alright...."
    "In the morning the sun's going to shine...."
    "....Just wait for the daylight" :peace:
     
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    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thank you both for the lovin support
    and yes Rich in time
    cant wait for that day but in time...
    Peace
    and thankz again
    Angel
     
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